It's a shame this is abandoned. I totally love this fic. Draco as 'Puff' is hilarious. I really like the way you've given Xander a darker edge without turning him into an unlikeable super!sociopath. I'd love to see his relationship with Snape develop. They would make great bff. lol. Also the Hermione tour was fantastic. I'd love to read more if you ever feel like picking this up again. It's really a great premise.

Wow, wow, just wow, this is great.
It is too bad you left it hanging, this is a wonderful fic with huge potential.
If you can find a way to continue it please do!

I like what you have done so far with the story and I hope that you will get inspired to add more chapters to it.

::Gives the plot bunny a Chocolate Muffin::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Well, just reread this... again. This is one of my favorite Xander's Real Family stories and I hope that someday you get around to taking it up again.

Very good

Oh absolutely brilliant story, just love it! :D
I'd so much like to read more... please.
Congrats and kudos! May thy muse give thee all necessary to finish this wonderful piece.

Awesome story I love the dark side of Xander and the fact that he's related to the black's, so we're seeingit from their perspective.

I can't believe you abandoned this story. It is very interesting and drew me in quite quickly. If you ever return to it, I would love to read more.

Evil author\muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the evilest of authors.

good story, bye

I love this I wish it was updated.

Needs an update sometime.

This is such a wonderful story. Please continue it.

I've read this all in one astonishing go and am absolutely shattered that it hasn't been updated in so long. The premise is perfect, the plot, characterizations? Bravo!

The only thing I would suggest is a beta to catch the various (like the one I just took out *winces*) typos sprinkled throughout because they tend to trip a reader up just a bit.

Again, bravo.

I became curious, though -- given Xander and Draco's relation here, if Angel and Harry were related somehow (particularly given the timing), there'd be no end to how hilarious this could be in that regard.

I have always loved both Angel and Harry and Xander and Draco both grew on me very firmly for different reasons and anything that forces the four of them to work together despite their respective rivalries (or, at least, Xander's inability to grow up, at least where Angel was concerned) is just plain gold.

It'd also give Xander a way to get one-up on Dumbledore by being shown how the Dursleys treat Harry and, last of all, there's the fact that technically (or not, depending on which side you chose), they're all related, which would absolutely kill three out of the four.

I figure that Angel has his hands too full with Spike to resent Xander that much.

Cool! I know you will most likely never update as it has been four years since that last update but I just wanted to say that this was very cool. I like Xander like this he's so cool! And Draco's nickname! LMAO! I thought I was going to die. Puff the Magic Dragon!!! LOL!