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Review of chapter "an unexpected visit" from Shieldage
So Destiny and sorta-demon Rogue are joining the Cleveland Group while Faith and Mystique are running New York? Sweet.
She has the giant centipedes with her in New York? That's got to be horrible on rent.
Oh, the synopsis needs 'branch' not 'brance'. You also flip between present and past tense in random places.
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "an unexpected visit" from Harry
I think that Faith just found herself someone to start training. And Marie/Rouge is going to be a very INTERESTING project!
Review By [Harry
] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "an unexpected visit" from Arekanderu
Interestign story.I would love to see a sequel
Review By [Arekanderu
] • Date [19 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "an unexpected visit" from wrightie
liked the chapter, hope you plan to continue.
Looks like it should be very strange and fun.
Review By [wrightie
] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "an unexpected visit" from CPTSkip
Your story is seriously warped and weird, but I liked it. I laughed several times and I hope you continue with it. I wonder just how weird you can make Faith's life. Lol! By the way, you didn't include any disclamers at the first of the story. Just saying.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [11 Jan 05] • Not Rated