Review of chapter "Dawn's Trouble with Work" from mortepinile
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nice, I like it the wittynes is good.
Review By [mortepinile] • Date [15 Jul 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Trouble with Work" from Bugeyedmonster
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Are these the same 'girl power' villagers from "Dawn's New Job"? If so, I'd love to see their reaction to witch-Willow. In many early societies 'wise women' or the witches were highly respected and feared. I'd love to see them all kowtow-ing to "the great magic-worker" Willow. They might even respect the SGC more if they think that there are more witches like Willow on Earth.
Does that give you more inspiration for writing more of this storyline?
Keep writing! (^_^)/
Comments from author:
Heh. You have the same train of thought that I have. Yes they are the same villagers in both stories. Willow showing up will impress the villagers with her girl power mojo working skills.
thanks.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [13 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Trouble with Work" from malaskor
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LOL That was a funny ficlet... just what I needed :)
Keep it up and thanks for sharing this with us.
Review By [malaskor] • Date [12 Jan 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Trouble with Work" from MusingsOfApathy
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That was an absolutely fantastic story. The only way to make it better is to turn it into an epic. I love the idea of Dawn working on SG-1.
Mike.
Review By [MusingsOfApathy] • Date [12 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Trouble with Work" from sapphire
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I agree with Rubberducky please continue.
Review By [sapphire] • Date [12 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Trouble with Work" from WhiteWolf
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Willow is getting pissed, good thing. She has a backbone, let her use it. *grin*
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [12 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Trouble with Work" from WhiteWolf
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Come you can't make Dawn share with Andrew, that's unfair. *sarcastic Grin*
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [12 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Trouble with Work" from BrendanM
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It was a cute fic. (Who says Deus Ex Machina isn't a valid literary device?)
Your dialog was a little sparse (something which I am guilty of from time to time) and there was a bit of a problem with punctuation and a few misspellings. Other than those things, good work.
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [12 Jan 05] • Not Rated
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