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BrownFinderth Review:
Very glad to see that Dawn got back out among the stars!!!
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BrownFinderth ] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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breve Review:
never been a huge fan of dawn, but i love how you've written her here :)
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breve ] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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maxthehobbit Review:
One observation - you need to look at your work before you post it to clear up the typos, bad spelling and some times punctuation.
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maxthehobbit ] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Day at Work" from
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Enjoyed this very much! Thank you for sharing and writing it. :)
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serenityselena Review:
marvelous story ...
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serenityselena ] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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lucyferr Review:
“So how was your night sir?” Carter inquired as she moved her Jell-O out of the man’s long reach. Even though she had never technically studied the effect, she suspected that by sitting at the tables in the cafeteria Jack’s arms grew. It seemed that no matter where a dish was placed on a table, if he wanted it his arms could reach it. Pie, cake, Jell-O, or an edible main dish nothing was safe from the pit of his stomach when he was hungry.
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lucyferr ] • Date [14 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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Great story.
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Review of chapter "Hey Jack" from
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"Great. Now my butt is classified."
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heartsinger Review:
Fun. Punctuation could use work, but a good story overall.
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heartsinger ] • Date [17 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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APS Review:
My thought about the storie as a whole.
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APS ] • Date [27 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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Lyd Review:
Really enjoyed this story. Dawn was portrayed very well, and interactions with her were well written. Illyria was hysterically funny (ribcage as a hat or spine as a crown).
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Lyd ] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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spring Review:
This is beyond wonderful. I really love what they did to that evil senator please continue writing such wonderful fic's
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spring ] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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GundumM Review:
all in all it's nice
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GundumM ] • Date [25 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's New Job" from
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thanks for a fun story.
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BarbarossaRotbart Review:
A very funny tale, even if they all act completely OOC. But still a very funny tale.
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BarbarossaRotbart ] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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