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Review of chapter "Light in Your Eyes" from nightshadowlife
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awww this was an awesome chapter!!!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [18 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baby Steps" from FireWolfe
Review:
Great story and series. I do hope you will update more often and let us know what happened. It really is a great twist on theme.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I think it was one of my very first series (I wrote it freshman year and was so very proud of it). There are a lot of baby!fics out there, and at the time I started writing it, it seemed like everyone was happy and no serious complications with the relationship with the parents, so I thought 'what if it was harder? what would Buffy choose, the easy ignore the destiny in live in happyland, or make the hard choices.'. And it is so hard for her to be the only one, and similiarly to share the power. But she's a mom now, and she has to learn to delegate. I've already started working on the last two parts (added an epi to the original plot outline.). It'll be a while, but not a five year gap like last time.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [7 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Light in Your Eyes" from Eureka
Review:
I am SOO glad that you came back to this one. This chappie is a tearjerker. Keep up the great writing.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [7 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Light in Your Eyes" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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*sniffle* Loved the scene between Buffy and Vi at the end. Hopefully it will go a long way to smoothing things out between Buffy and Charlie.

EDIT: By the way, can I say how beyond thrilled I am that you've updated?
Comments from author:
Vi was never in the original plot line, but she beat out the Sue I had had planned to introduce (because, well, the Chamomile epilogue hinted at Buffy and Charlie's end-game after all, and Buffy was being seriously antagonistic through out the first two parts.) to kind of kick Buffy into the right zone. Because if Dawn couldn't persuade her, and Charlie was getting nowhere fast, some one had to do the dirty work to get her to stay.

It was really all a stroke of luck that I found it moldering away on one of my flash drives. I had to speed-read the entire series to figure out where my head had been. The whole Charlie/Buffy/Cammi bit at the beginning was written for over - at least three of four years now (good God, I am a procrastinator, or my plot mongoose just got really really busy)
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [7 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where Did I Go Right?" from Eureka
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I really hope that you go back to this story. I saw that folks have been asking since 2007 that you continue it, please do.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [5 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Did I Go Right?" from spring
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I love this fic! Please please finish this fic!
Review By [spring] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Did I Go Right?" from DemonChildeKyra
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I love it! I can't wait to read parts 3 and 4!
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [12 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Did I Go Right?" from CharmedSlayer
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WICKED
I love your series... I love this story and I love the other ones too

I have to say i love the pairing idea... It's good to see one that isnt that common and I also loved the Monogoose THAT IS SOO CUTE

Anyhow excuse my babbling I cant wait for you to update this story or write another in the series
Review By [CharmedSlayer] • Date [21 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Did I Go Right?" from LurkerOOl
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I'd like to hear how Faith did with the Hellmouth and the Scoobies. I kinda like that the couples could be shown slowly getting together in this series. Looking forward to see what you do with it.
Review By [LurkerOOl] • Date [29 Dec 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Did I Go Right?" from lumierelanuit
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I love this series. The character situations are real which can be difficult to portray in crossover fan fiction.
Review By [lumierelanuit] • Date [26 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Did I Go Right?" from (Moderator)acs
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Very nice character development. Even the addition of psuedo-mongoose wisdom seems to fit in with Buffy actually needing to think about things and not just running back to Sunnydale. (Though how did the critter know about Faith?)
Comments from author:
Thanks! Edgar has been Dawn's pet for nearly a year, so he'd know a lot about Faith and the rest of the Scoobies through Dawn. He also happens to be a very special creature that knows things he really couldn't know any other way.
How else would he give me all my plots?
~J
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [13 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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