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Review of chapter "Chapter 8c" from storiescollector
Review:
Enjoyed the story. Universe B - No Anubis but mostly no Earth, Universe A Anubis and mostly intact Earth. Interesting start points for both Universes. Thanks for your efforts.
Review By [storiescollector] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8c" from LaFlooze
Review:
Excellent merging of fandoms and universes. Great handling of the events occurring in the two major settings. Definitely compelling on the emotional level. I cared about every character, feeling an equal pull from both sides of the mirror. Thank you for writing and sharing!
Review By [LaFlooze] • Date [8 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8c" from Misty
Review:
Congrats on a fabtastic story. I really enjoyed it, thank you
Review By [Misty] • Date [7 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8c" from war
Review:
great story congrats on finishing it.
Review By [war] • Date [7 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8c" from DigiEmissary
Review:
I just finished rereading this a week ago in preparation for the new chapter, and my birthday was this weekend. You have great timing! =)

This fic remains one of my all-time favorite BTVS/SG1 crossovers. You have a real gift for alternate universes.

I was very satisfied with this finale. The scenes with Illyria taking out Anubis and Cordelia, Tara, and Willow all fighting Kebechet were both great climaxes.

For the epilogue(s), I definitely want to see if the Asgard show up to help Jack and John, and the rebuilding of Earth in Universe B.
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [7 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8b" from Gideon
Review:
Almost there! Keep up the good work! I hope Willow can get back out of the House once the time comes, it might decide it would be safer to force her to stay :)
Now both of the Universes have their power supply they are almost ready to power up the ancient weapon. Of course they don't really know what it is or what it will do. Oh, well. Nothing ventured, nothing gained :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8b" from Odin
Review:
Great story. I had almost given up hope that you would update it. I'll have to go back and re-read the first part, but I am sure it will be just as enjoyable the second time around. Looking forward to another update (hopefully a lot sooner). Thanks for the story.
Review By [Odin] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8b" from draconis
Review:
Glad to see an update. This was a very good piece of work when I read long ago. Planning to re-read.

A couple of nits...either colloquially or syntactically, "grounded out" and "for sure" should not be used as such in the places you used them throughout the story:

"grounded out" replace with "ground out"
Example:
"John banged his head against the wall in frustration as he grounded out...." change to
"John banged his head against the wall in frustration as he ground out...."

"for sure" replace with "sure"
Example:
"...shoes that Fred was for sure were worth quite a bit of money." change to
"...shoes that Fred was sure were worth quite a bit of money.
Review By [draconis] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8a" from DancyerMcCoy
Review:
ARGH! No updates in almost two years! Please, please, please don't abandon such a terrific, well written and well plotted story.
Review By [DancyerMcCoy] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8a" from shawnie
Review:
I just read this and was sooo disappointed when I came to the end and realized that it hasn't been updated in over a year. I really, really hope you find time to finish it. I've enjoyed what you've done till now.
Review By [shawnie] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8a" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Apparently, I haven't read this in an exceptionally long time. Nevertheless, I got a bit teary eyed. I love you not-quite reunion of Fred with her family and Lorne is perfect.

The Willow and Univ B storylines continue to flow as well.

Thank you.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8a" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
I love this story too... Just like your other one, I'm desperately hoping that your new exciting life isn't too much for your great writing career. I really hope that you won't forget your SG/BtVS xovers. Thanks for great work. Please keep it coming whenever you can.

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [4 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8a" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Great story.

Seems Sheppard was being insensitive to Cameron, her emotions towards House are even more complicated because of Earth's decimation.

Climactic final chapter coming up, eh? I hope to see more of Universe B's Angel and Host-Willow ;)

Great appearance of Lorne and nice touch with Fred's parents being prepared and not letting on...

Nice Cordelia and a good way for her to keep the visions.

Nice way for Riley and Buffy to find a lasting relationship.

Hey, was Graham's fleshy demon thing only activated because he stepped into a reality where Willow had called the Potentials? Or was it just a matter of time?
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying this story.

Yeah, he was insensitive to Cameron when it came to House. Everyone is on edge at the moment.

As for Universe B's Angel and Host-Willow, they aren't going to be seen until the very end (this last chapter will be posted in three installments, and they won't show until the third - at least action wise).

I'm glad you like Cordelia and her visions. I just wasn't about to let her go in Universe B. She can be fun at times, and there will be more of her in the next installment.

I'm also happy that you are happy with Riley and Buffy. I actually liked Riley on Buffy, until his downward spiral. I wanted a Riley that was more in place within himself and his relationship with Buffy. Hopefully others agree on this pairing as you do.

And as for Graham, it was basically a matter of time. It just wore down because when the Initiative was disbanded, it fell through the cracks and wasn't properly dealt with. I'll try to fix that when I have time so that it is more clear.

Jes
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8a" from RevDorothyL
Review:
So glad you're continuing with this, and the scene with Fred, Charity, and Lorne brought tears to my eyes.

Congrats on your new mommy-ness, as well!
Comments from author:
I can't believe it. I noticed the other day that I have three years invested in this story! I didn't realize it had been that long. With all that time devoted to it, I can't step away now... so continue, I must!

Thanks about the scene with Fred, Charity and Lorne. I thought it would be nice to show a family scene, where Fred knows what may happen, but decides to spend it with Family. Of course, Lorne sees Fred as family also. There will be more scenes with them (about to attempt to sit and write one).

Thanks also for your congrats on my new mommy-ness. It's tiring, but she's a precious gift.

Jes
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8a" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.

and congratulations!
Comments from author:
Thank you on both fronts. It's been a long time, and I just want you to know that its nice hearing from you, as you pretty much have reviewed on all my posts. Thanks for sticking with me.

Now off to "binky" duty...

Jes
Review By [war] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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