Review of chapter "Baggage" from willamthebloody
Cute, very cute. How about a sequel?
Review By [willamthebloody
] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Baggage" from magicfaerie
ahahahaha wonderful! faith and sawyer, what a pair. oh man. great interaction, showing that faith will not give him anything he wants to get her stuff back and not being afraid to use force to get it. the beginning of the story seemed a little bit too much explanation - people who read this story have probably already seen lost, and therefore know the basic characters. it might be better to stick to faith and sawyer, or do a brief glance-over of the others instead of a few paragraphs. (although i do like the "ever popular and mysterious kate"!) this is the first fic i have seen in this crossover, and i quite enjoyed it! well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks Magicfaerie! I always look forward to hearing from you. I had been toying with the idea of writing something using Lost for a few weeks now, and the other night it came to me that if I was going to do a crossover, Faith and Sawyer would be real fun. I just didn't want to get into a large fic since I have so many others sitting by the side. I agree with the explanation part. I just knew I wanted it to be more than two or three paragraphs so added it as filler. If I do another one I promise to lay off of the explanations!!! Maybe I'll come back later and do a more in depth, longer story with the two. It should be fun. Well, thanks again! It's great having a loyal feedbacker out there. You keep me smiling when I check to see if anyone is reading.
Review By [magicfaerie
] • Date [15 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]