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Review of chapter "Vanishing Dreams" from normanK
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Great story. Hope you come back to it soon.
Review By [normanK] • Date [22 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vanishing Dreams" from Inoeth
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Wow. I just binged and read this entire story in three days. I am truly impressed in your ability to merge the two verses together into a coherent story, and while some things like Buffy and Harry ending up as siblings is a little bit cliche at this point in fanfiction, you've done it in an interesting and unique way (given that they are technically only half-siblings) and dragged the entire mystery out for longer than most fics are in total- which was rather well done.

I was pleasantly surprised at how you changed the Watchers Council and made them out to be a very different and far superior organization than they are portrayed to be in canon.

I will say that one element of this story does seem to be missing- that of romance (or at the very least, teen hormones) which was only somewhat in the HP books, is more prominent in the Buffy show and can be shown to far more 'realism' in novels where there are no filters. Now that Faith is in the picture as a full time character and not as the one they have to save, the words of the day are innuendo and sex- as to her, it seems like both something she enjoys as well as a defense mechanism- not to mention something she uses to rile other people up- and as seen in the later seasons of Buffy, Buffer herself is not as much a prude as she claims.

I am truly curious as to how things will be wrapped up, as it looks like the story is getting closer to an end- although there are plenty of ways to draw it out with a longer war against Voldimort (and also other big bads that could be brought into the story).

There's also that niggling question about Willow (and Tara) and Wiccan based magic (vs?) wand based magic...? Given that you're coming up to the end of year year, you may have the option of bringing the scoobies into the story if you want...?

anyways, great story and I look forward to seeing how it all ends.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [16 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vanishing Dreams" from raxadian
Review:
Let me guess, The Sivin was the demon the Slayer was made of?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When the Sleeper Bleeds" from raxadian
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Now that was weird, I hope Buffy didn't end branded.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Serious Consequences" from raxadian
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Okay, so Moldy Shorts could have got Buffy, but how he found about the Slayer in the first place if it was so well hidden? Something doesn't fit here... at least this version of what Watchers Council aren't jerks.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "While You Work" from raxadian
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Ah yes, Mouldy Shorts, dammit.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dirty Complexities" from raxadian
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So, by running away, Buffy have Faith a worse fate than being the Mayor henchwoman and being months in a coma. And her mother also died earlier.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sins Of Omission" from raxadian
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Ah, so she isn't Buffy Black? Are there any good fics where Sirius Black is Buffy father?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Once the Trumpet Sounds" from raxadian
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At least the dog didn't die this time.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battles Worth Forbearance" from raxadian
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No wonder Wizards are not allowed to interact with the Slayer, damn.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Baited and Switched" from raxadian
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Damn, wait... something will go wrong'
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spiders and Flies" from raxadian
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Let me guess, who Moldy Shorts really wants is Buffy?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "None Left Behind" from raxadian
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Well, why is Buffy there if she isn't allowed to do anything?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "After the Wind" from raxadian
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I bet she would prefer dealing with ADAM and the Initiative than this.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Out of the Pan" from raxadian
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It was a trap, is Snape Buffy father?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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