Darn hate that you stopped. Very good start very bad end. Why? Because there isn't one.
What is more sad you stopped writing completly.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Reunion" from ChosenForever
Review:
Good job. It would be cool if you could add in for Buffy's past with being a slayer. For instance you could include some of the fights she did on the show or have some of angel's fights be part of her past.
Review By [ChosenForever] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Well you could have some drama ensue between max/buffy/alec since max doesn't want her sister near her. Also, you could add in some Xander puns to make the situation much worse since he works with Alec... hehe... Maybe have Riley in this fic and have him be an officer for maintaining the X5's (Buffy doesn't know this) so some tension between him and alec... have Alec save buffy, that would be nice! :0)
Review By [Drusilla] • Date [1 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family Reunion" from KnightWulf
Review:
it's good, question is buffy the slayer in this, and ideas how about buffy having had problems with the initative in the past and going to take them down with her family, which brings another question to mind, i s her family still alive and in zacks case still intacted. Midnight
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [9 Mar 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Nice chappie! I love fics where Buffy and Max are related Hmm...some suggestions...what about max and buffy going into heat and the two go cruising for guys? lol. Buffy being introduced to everyone in terminal city...maybe a mission to destroy the initive or something? Maybe mor emoments from manticore or even introducing Jondy into the story and have some max/sarah/jondy praks or mayham or whatever. Keep up the great work and please update soon.
hi i just want to say i love this story and its one of the best buffy and dark angel crossovers i've ever read. i cant wait for the next chapter so keep up the good work
toodles
Review By [sissysara] • Date [28 Jan 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]