Review of chapter "Small and Broken" from Shieldage
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Awwww.... Cute group. Nice to see Lilo taking Gunn completely in stride. Yep, he's found a good place for 'occupational therapy'. Excellent choice on Bubbles' part.
Review By [Shieldage] • Date [27 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Small and Broken" from PrincessTai
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lol!
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Model Citizen" from PrincessTai
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>>“Well, Charles it’s like this. Ohana means family, family means nobody gets left behind. Or forgotten.” Cobra Bubbles sighed. “I feel I’ve left you behind for far too long.”
AWWWW! I didn't even read chapter two and I already know you have to continue this story. Sometimes people need a third chance. And I think Lilo will be just the one to show him he didn't fail Alonna or Fred
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
*ROTFLMAO* You MUST continue. Please??? And curious as to why Stitch was using an Ewok phrase?
Comments from author:
It was just something I made up that sounded like something he said. . . And as soon as the dreaded homework is murdered, I'll try and hop right back to them. ~J
Oh, this one is going to be great fun. I adore Lilo and Stitch, and you've done a great job of capturing the tone of the story as well as the dialogue. I hope you stay inspired and keep this going for a while, it has wonderful potential. Gunn definitely needs some time with Ohana.
Review By [Phidan] • Date [23 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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