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Faith's reflections

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Review of chapter "Faith's reflections" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
"Willkins and I was" should be were. Also courtesy, not curtsey. Some other bits where the tense shifts oddly.

Nice mastermind Faith. Good use of Amy's amnesia power.

I dunno. Sounds like she won too easily.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith's reflections" from TonyTheJew
Review:
Looks good, would mind a long story. but good.
Review By [TonyTheJew] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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