Review of chapter "Faith's reflections" from Shieldage
"Willkins and I was" should be were. Also courtesy, not curtsey. Some other bits where the tense shifts oddly.
Nice mastermind Faith. Good use of Amy's amnesia power.
I dunno. Sounds like she won too easily.
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Faith's reflections" from TonyTheJew
Looks good, would mind a long story. but good.
Review By [TonyTheJew
] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]