Review of chapter "7" from nerfherder
I'm really hoping this did develope into a larger arc. You did good work on the psych side of the equation.
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mare Nubium" from DancingRain
Heya. *S* I just started reading your story. Haven't even finished the first chapter as of yet. So far it's quite interesting. You have a wonderful imagination and the voices are really quite good. I was just wondering if you have a beta reader though, because there are little things that should be changed. (spelling or wording or what-have-you) Nothing major, as I said, just little things.
Either way, so far I REALLY like this fic. *runs off to continue reading*
Review By [DancingRain
] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from falsegod
PRETTY GOOD STORY I JUST WISH THERE WAS MORE
Review By [falsegod
] • Date [12 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from jujukittychick
nicely done. liked how you integrated the two worlds and made it realistic. poor xander, if something happens, it's going to be to him lol.
Review By [jujukittychick
] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from MalificentTheEvilQue
Lovely :3 ~
Review By [MalificentTheEvilQue
] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from onefreeman
Really nice start here, I hope the plot bunny brings you plenty more for this come Easter! :)
Review By [onefreeman
] • Date [11 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from TwoBlackDragons
Hook them up as a series please.
I like that this isn't a super Xander and Buffy bashing story as I've come to hate them.
Super Xander isn't so bad but the Buffy bashing blows chunks.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons
] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from Obsidian
Very good story, about time I read a Xander-Wolf Story. Thanks.
Review By [Obsidian
] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from wover
I loved Xander in this story. I think I've read it before but I don't think I reviewed. (shame on me^_^) Anyways, good job and keep up the good work!
Review By [wover
] • Date [19 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mare Nubium" from ShooflyPie
I have to admit, I've never read any of the Anita Blake stories--just the fanfic. So I wouldn't know canon from a hole in the wall. But I reeeeally enjoyed this story.
There was something incredibly real for me about this one--Xander's experience with the lupanar reminded me very strongly of my first rave (way, way back in the day). I was practically having sense flashbacks, you know? This story described something that must be some sort of human commonality. And described it well.
I can understand fading to black for most of it, but after having read this story I wonder what an author like this one could do with trying to describe some of the rest of the Change experience.
Review By [ShooflyPie
] • Date [14 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7" from MamaLadyWolf
I really enjoy the story and the other part of it you have posted. PLease more.
Review By [MamaLadyWolf
] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from LordCorwin
Nicely done ... now I just need to find some "related stories" ...
Review By [LordCorwin
] • Date [17 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from Ansku
Intriguing :) I'm looking forward to the next part.
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [13 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7" from APS
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS
] • Date [5 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Silvarerum
Jean Clod? Brimstone State? Hysterical!
Review By [Silvarerum
] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]