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Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from Dragan
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God of Gods takes on a scary meaning when the snakes come into play.

I take it you have to figure out which style of mission for the first joint operation?

Perhaps something to reassure Jack that the 4 mini's are being helped?
Review By [Dragan] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from AngelQueen
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WOW! This is an incredible story! I love the left-field twist you've got going on here, with the President selling the Stargate to the New Council in an effort to save it from Kinsey's stupidity. Brilliant! And you've done an amazing job keeping everyone in-character, which is always a huge, huge plus for me!

Thanks so much for sharing! Hope you decide to write more for this story! :)
Review By [AngelQueen] • Date [1 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from CozZaretta
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This is still one of my favorite Stargate crossover fics. Even though it isn't complete I come back to it from time to time.
Review By [CozZaretta] • Date [31 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from Netchka
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Love the story. Can't wait for the next chapters to come.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from brnmac
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Love the premise. Please update soon
Review By [brnmac] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from bradsan
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please update. I'm curious.

good job, good writing. great story.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from Mwhahahaha
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I am really liking this story. I've read some of the other ones before and I just didn't think that they were quite as good as this...it flows really well together and is more believable...I can't wait to read more of this!
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from Geyer
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Nice story. Good riddance to Kinsey, although I wouldn't mind you bringing him back and kicking him around some more. It will be interesting to see the two groups getting to trust each other. The military, or at least the SGC, really needs to be involved. The Council might have Slayers to spare, but they don't have the infrastructure to support offworld teams, at least at this point, and there's the issue of Slayers not killing humans. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from KingOfCretins
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Great Stuff

One point I'm going to make is that while the Council could run the SGC by themselves they cannot run allot of the other things needed to keep the Earth safe from alien attack. To keep the Earth safe from space based attack they need to develop weapons and fighters/ships these things require scientists and resources that even a group like the Council could never provide by itself given the costs stated in the show.
The best way I can think of for the Council to do this would be along the lines of the Council using their ties to various nations across the world to pull in the best resources, materiel and manpower (scientific & military) from those nations. To do this they would need to create some form of agreement in which the Council acts as a neutral party coordinating everything and preventing Politics from interfering with the program (and by extension the safety of the Earth) while Governments provide everything else, in return all governments get the benefits of the program allowing them to create a unified global defense against alien attack.

Anyway whatever you decide to do I can’t wait form more, update soon please.
Review By [KingOfCretins] • Date [25 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from serenityselena
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well .... this sure is a very original twist .....
Kinsey can sure be a lot of trouble for our heroes ... glad to see they managed to get rid of him...
this gathering should be very interesting ...
hope to read more ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [20 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from Featherfoot
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UPDATE! I almost forgot this fic existed till I stumbled upon it again.
Review By [Featherfoot] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from Robby
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Awesome story!! Looking forward to more!!
Review By [Robby] • Date [28 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from dragondawn
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good story so far, hope your muse keeps kickng it abourt!
Review By [dragondawn] • Date [28 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from aveave
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Great chapter. Are you going to write next chapter soon?
Review By [aveave] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Demon in the Room" from FireWolfe
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Love an update please.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [15 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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