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Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, I remember this now. I thought it was such a shame that you quit it right before finishing it. Oh well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from draconis
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Great story!

Since you relatively recently updated "Blood Bonds" I can only hope you'll come back to this story as well.

I'd really like to see Harry take on the mantle of a battle-hardened warrior-mage. At least that seems to be the direction you were going...

Also want to see where you're taking the Buffy/Faith Slayer-bond relationship. I can see several interesting ways that could go, including seeing Faith return with B to the hell dimension empire...using demon magic to create a Slayer army in days (due to the time differential), and then returning to their home dimension "loaded for bear". Could be all sorts of fun!

A minor criticism...I thought using a "quick" Voldy spell to get Buffy to recover her memories was a just a tiny bit too simplistic. It obviously did work...especially as it's blood magic. But perhaps even more focus in the story on that fact would have made it more credible...within reach of the powers of a "Dark" Wizard? More build-up of how big a deal blood magic is, why the "good guys" didn't consider it, etc. would have helped. (otherwise, the reader is left asking why wouldn't it have been a simple matter for "Dumby" or Willow to have used a simple spell to help Buffy recover her memories?
Review By [draconis] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chains Forged in Fire" from FireWolfe
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Love to see more
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from nightshadowlife
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Amazing story!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [8 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chains Forged in Fire" from FireWolfe
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Any chance of seeing either an update of sequel?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from deathgeonous
Review:
Not to be rude, but it's almost over and you stop? Well, thanks for writing what you did of this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from FireWolfe
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I would really love and update. This is to interesting to be left hanging.

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from Krysstinia
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I found this on fanfic.net, a while ago and really enjoyed it. I just found it again and enjoyed it twice as much. I hope you update soon. I want to see how Harry deals with indirectly being responsible for Draco's death and I want to see how Buffy handles what she's become.

Maybe Spike could help her cope. . . :-p
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from Dragonelf
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I hope you will get inspired to continue this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some carrot pecan pie::

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Life... is like a grapefruit. It's orange and
squishy, and has a few pips in it, and some
folks have half a one for breakfast.
- Douglas Adams
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chains Forged in Fire" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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I love this story. Please don't leave us hanging at the edge of the battlefield... It's just too dangerous, and too painful.

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from gigi
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Great story. Please update!
Review By [gigi] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from MrPowell
Review:
ever plan on continuing?
Review By [MrPowell] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from ShinaSchatten
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I hope you finish this soon; it is very good. Your plot is really good, the characterization is well done and I really want to see how it all ends.
Review By [ShinaSchatten] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chains Forged in Fire" from vargamor
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It's insanely evil for you to leave us hanging right here...

It's a great story. A completely believable meld of both universes. You've made it easy to see how and why Harry could give the order he did. I'm loving Slayer and hope that the final product still has a lot her in it. I, personally, thought the "Head it is..." was very punny! I also love the Elite, although they're probably bad guys somewhere...LOL

You should update soon, you still have fans awaiting..
Review By [vargamor] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Battle" from shiverinstunned
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This story is awesome. The voices are spot on and as purrfus said, the fact that a goody two-shoes [Harry] could actually make a freakin harsh decision cuz it's war is amazing to read. The plot too is beautifully developed, and Slayer is wonderfully real and complicated. Please update, you left us at the best part. Waiting impatiently for the end to a kickass story...
Review By [shiverinstunned] • Date [10 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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