Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Faith" from alynambered
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"Oh, fer cryin' out loud!!!"
I will if it gets you to finish this story. (serious puppy-dog eyes)
Excellent concept, well developed story; but could use some beta/editing work. You have multiple instances of 'the', instead of 'they' or 'there'; 'were', instead of 'was where' and other similar errors. Otherwise, I had to read it straight through; couldn't stop myself!! :)
Review By [alynambered] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Faith" from mariegilbert
Review:
I really hope you continue this story sometime in the near future! I really want to see how things play out!
Review By [mariegilbert] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch 17 - Faith" from Featherfoot
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So I'm guessing that Faith will now be able to communicate with Buffy? It would be good if Faith knew Buffy's plans, 'cause then she could make sure the SGC doesn't interfere. Anywho, great story! And please, PLEASE update soon :)
Review By [Featherfoot] • Date [23 Nov 10] • Not Rated
I love the story. You managed to find a completely original way of blending the two mythologies, which is becoming a rarity, and I love the way you made the ribbon stones sentient.
Please update more often.
-puppydog face-
I'll resort to tears if I have to.
Review By [eset] • Date [5 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Very glad to see you have started updating again. I've missed this story in particular, and now I've started tracking it.
The idea behind it and its development are innovative and it's generally well written. I do wish you'd spent a bit more time developing the foundation for why Balor accepted Buffy as his First Prime. For a Goa'uld to do that so quickly seemed just a little bit too convenient.
Nice to see Faith having a more active role in the story. Now you've got me wondering if Anise is going to act on her concerns and try something underhanded against Faith.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [draconis] • Date [23 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]