Review of chapter "Eternity's Dance" from MarcusSLazarus
Could use a bit more depth and development before diving into the main action, but the central concept is certainly interesting (Particularly the idea of Cordelia and Lilah being the reincarnations of Neferteri/Evelyn and Anack-su-Namun respectively); I would DEFINITELY like to see more stories featuring this concept...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eternity's Dance" from dreamfall
This is a fantastic story! Very nice job weaving together the two realities-- they fit remarkably well. And the way you did the past lives fit rather wonderfully. Well-written, involving, the plot worked nicely and the characters were true-to-type. Admittedly it's been a while since I saw the mummy and I never saw the sequel, but this actually made me to (re)watch them; always a sign of a good fic. I only wish there was more of it!
Comments from author:
Review By [dreamfall
] • Date [4 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eternity's Dance" from BrendanM
Great work. Although, I do wonder what exactly Jonathan did with that diamond...
Review By [BrendanM
] • Date [31 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]