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Broken Inside Torn Outside

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Review of chapter "Broken Inside Torn Outside" from (Recent Donor)kribby
Review:
Hey,

I'd do some editing.... maybe put html tags around the sections of the fic that are part of the song... I'd also add a comma to the title so it reads Broken Inside, Torn Outside....


Oh, and I did like this. It brought me back to the HP world for a moment. Thank you for writing and posting!
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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