Review of chapter "Broken Inside Torn Outside" from
kribbyReview:
Hey,
I'd do some editing.... maybe put html tags around the sections of the fic that are part of the song... I'd also add a comma to the title so it reads Broken Inside, Torn Outside....
Oh, and I did like this. It brought me back to the HP world for a moment. Thank you for writing and posting!
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kribby] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Not Rated