Review of chapter "Broken Inside Torn Outside" from kribby
I'd do some editing.... maybe put html tags around the sections of the fic that are part of the song... I'd also add a comma to the title so it reads Broken Inside, Torn Outside....
Oh, and I did like this. It brought me back to the HP world for a moment. Thank you for writing and posting!
Review By [kribby
] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Not Rated