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A Slayerette's Slide

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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from agnar
Review:
Wasn't bad til this chapter. Just because canon sliders, and buffy too really, so often had the 'good guys' doing moronic shit like NOT instantly killing the uber evil guy so he could escape and keep killing people (this sliders villain, spike, angelus...) is no reason for *you* to have your own versions be such dumbasses too.

And honestly the entire 'kidnapping' of Xander was pretty silly and unrealistic. It made this sliders villain out to be some sort of super human who could hide from an entire base of trained soldiers actively looking for him, while he was able to spy on them enough to learn Xander was part of the group, then follow and set up an ambush, *all by himself* of an entire patrol squad, JUSt so he could capture Xander, torture and then kill him...

Yeah, sorry but it was all too much.
Comments from author:
Yeah, looking back I realize there was a lot I did wrong with this story, or that I should have done better, but you know, hindsight being 20/20 and all that jazz.

If I ever feel motivated enough I may go back and do some edits and rewrites on it.
Review By [agnar] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Slayerette's Slide" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Hey! You mentioned the DVDs early in the fic. Sliders Season 4 is out, saw it for the first time on a store shelf today :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Slayerette's Slide" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Eh. Excessive on the Buffy reaction. Even when mad, she'd probably remember it's not a good idea to throw Xander around like that, could break him.

heh. Unless Wade dies and you fix Xander up with someone else, you probably want this filed under 'Pairing: Other Het' ;)

Nice touch with the Amy/Riley dimension. Nice to know that even if Rickman somehow survived the hungry spiders he's stuck in Faerun.

Good cliffhangers and feasible means to separate the party.

I thought the 'spill the beans' to strangers reoccurring bit was somewhat excessive. I see Amanda being vague and maybe even implying that drowning or fire could give Immortals their final death, in hopes of surviving an attempt on her life if someone acted on that misinformation.

Cool. Great job with the various magic items. You might consider writing a romp through a fantasy realm as a stand-alone piece because your magical world construction skills are quite good :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from tonisimone
Review:
GREAT STORY

although i don't really see xan & wade getting together the way youve done it sounds alright.

update soon
Review By [tonisimone] • Date [6 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Bluesnowman
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Great story so far hope that you pick it up sometime soon.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [1 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from banner
Review:
Fun and surprising.
Review By [banner] • Date [22 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from CPTSkip
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That was one FREAKING big cliffhanger. Please, pretty please with maple syrup on it, update your story more quickly than last time. By the way, nice update. Now go and write some more. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CPTSkip
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This was an interesting slide. I loved: “Who’s your favorite?” Jack asked. I'm sure Jack wanted Xander to say him. Lol! I look forward to more slides.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [4 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your Jarheads weren't bad. Normally one or two of the patrol would have been carrying heavy weapons and not left them in the jeeps. But other than that little nit, not bad at all. Interesting to see a world where the Scoobies didn't save the day. More, please?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Slayerette's Slide" from raven
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Per canon, Sunnydale is a couple hours outside of LA (see Buffy's season 1/2 comments about going into the city during the summers, etc.) I assume this is the second part of Sliders when they started introducing new people and the Professor is no longer sliding?
Review By [raven] • Date [2 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Slayerette's Slide" from Caliadragon
Review:
This was a very good beginning and I like the changes that you made to canon. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [2 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Slayerette's Slide" from CPTSkip
Review:
To quote Spike, "This is just ... neat." I think you will be able to have lots of fun with this crossover. And so will we. I hope you write more of the Sliding Xander's story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Slayerette's Slide" from Marti
Review:
i'm a great fan of both buffy and sliders and have long considered a cross over between the shows. very inventive making it xander-centric as i would have put willow or giles...grrl giles...on a slide. I think the whole 'you betrayed me, lying about kicking angel's ass ' thing was a little over the top, more than i ever thought i'd see buffy react to the news that Willow had planned on restoring the soul. regardless, he revived acathla and had to die to close the portal. end of story, whether he had a soul or not...but i digress. again buffy anger a little over the top, but quinn, remmy, maggy and wade were portrayed very close to the characters on television. Very good and I can't wait for the next one
Review By [Marti] • Date [1 Feb 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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