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Review of chapter "Eighty: The End" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
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I loved this story - and I'd like to see a aftermath to it in the end. Great work!
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [31 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eighty: The End" from luvsanime
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Whoa. Just wow. That's... whoa.
Review By [luvsanime] • Date [13 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eighteen: The Parts of Me I Cannot Hide" from FinalGuardian
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Why is it that so many really inventive HP-crossovers use a 'Canon' Harry who'suicidal and fairly thick at times?
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thirteen: Pain Like Icicles On The Trees" from FinalGuardian
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I'm sorry but what happened chap 12 was completely transparent the moment I finished reading how Harry described wizarding/wand magic(as close to nothing as possible)an not mentioning that the DE's are basically neo-Nazi terrorists and won't give a damn about the law.
Review By [FinalGuardian] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eighty: The End" from kitus
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Been waiting a few years for this ending. Very satisfying. while there is room for a sequel to see more of Harry in St Louis after being outcast from the British wizarding world, I'm good. Don't get me wrong, I wouldn't bitch either about it.

That said, a damned fine ending to my favorite Blake/Potter crossover.
Review By [kitus] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twenty-one: Starting to Dig" from kitus
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forgot to mention this earlier, but i dig how you switch perspectives appropriately; first person for anita and third person omniscient for harry, as is appropriate when each is the main character. just brilliant all the way around!
Review By [kitus] • Date [20 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five: Blood is thicker than water" from kitus
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okay, seriously, this is an awesome read. i can see Vernon being ignorant and pigheaded enough to not realize St. Louis is like the U.S. vampire Mecca.

Mainly i gotta give props. You capture Harry brilliantly, the minor recurring characters excellently, Nathaniel beautifully (sue me, i'm a fanboy for that character),and you do Anita as good or better than Hammilton does.

Color me very impressed!
Review By [kitus] • Date [20 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eighty: The End" from TrueRedRose
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What a journey; I've enjoyed the ride. Finding myself glad you've given us an ending, but also strangely sad. Feels like the end of an era. 9 years. Wow.
Review By [TrueRedRose] • Date [12 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eighty: The End" from EroSlackerMicha
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(blink) (blink)

what kind of ending is this?!?!?!? there are so many things unanswered. you spent all that time building up connections to Reece, to Ginny & Luna and you just....

You work for Bioware and the Mass Effect 3 team, don't you? at least say there will be a sequel. this was a good story I spent the day reading and to end it like this is like having sex and no finish.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [4 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eighty: The End" from mithrilandtj
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YAY! It's finally finished!

If you do ever do a sequel, how about Remus & Tonks coming over to visit?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eighty: The End" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
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I spent the last few days rereading this from the start. I was surprised at how many different plot points that had stuck in my memory as nice nice touches from stories I had read, but hadn't remembered the source for them came from this one story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eighty: The End" from Chan
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Whoa this epic is a glorious read even if one has to break it up for sleeping/eating and other necessities.
Review By [Chan] • Date [28 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eighty: The End" from laoshi
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A wonderful ending to a truly epic tale. Most novels are about 100,000 words, aren't they? So how does it feel to have written 5 novels? I really loved Harry's trick with the wand that was a great upbeat note to end on. Thank you for giving us the highlights to the sequel. It's great to know the direction you were going to take the next story in. I do remember reading a few other inevitable verse doodlings on your livejournal ages ago that I don't think ever got turned into completed stories. The only one I really remember is a Ginny POV where she gets a little jealous of harry's relationship with Nathaniel, which I thought was great. Are you ever going to post it here. Also your livejournal lead me to your dreamwidth , which led me to your AO3 account which I never knew you had. I thought you hadn't posted a new story in years so now I'm off to go download those.

But seriously this was a herculean piece of writing and I'm just so happy you managed to finish it. The later Anita books make me want to throw things sometimes. I completely understand why you lost your motivation for continuing with this story. Fanfic can be a way of taking a story in a different direction from the one the author of the original work intended. In some cases the results equal anything in the source material and in rarer cases with an author as talented and inspired as you are the original works can be surpassed. If any story has done that it's got to be this one. Thank you so much for writing it.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [27 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seventy-Nine: The Morning After" from laoshi
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I'm glad you decided to change who died rather than have everybody live. It adds more emotional impact to the story.I liked how you showed Mr and Mrs Weasley reacting differently to Charlie's death. A confrontation with the Ministry over Anita's necromancy was kind of inevitable, but I did want to shout at the screen Why can't Dumbledore take 30 seconds and explain why he wants Harry to stay in the Great Hall? It does make a much better story this way though. I can't wait to read the final chapter.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [27 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seventy-Eight: Bokor Majeur" from laoshi
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The payoffs keep coming. The Bokor Majeur has been the threat hanging over this story for so long. I suspected Anita would be at least tempted if not forced to use it during the final confrontation with Voldemort. I love the way you describe Anita and her powers its the equal of anything we got in the books. Elsa is a fascinating OC and her letting Anita's use of the Bokor Majeur slide felt very plausible. I also enjoyed their escape on the broom. Playing up Anita's fear of flying more could have been fun but I think it would have lashed with the tone of the rest of the chapter so you made the right choice. Anther great chapter.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [27 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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