This was a fabulous story!! I loved it. I could almost taste the tension between the two while they were fighting for domince. And the last line......"Spike just stared at the kid for a moment longer. The kid was starting to smirk again. Spike turned with a snap of his trench coat and walked off. Bugger this. Life was too long to have to deal with this kind of crap."
A brilliant ending!! I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Excellent story! I hope you get inspired to write a sequel.
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
haha! loved it! good representation of the characters, funny plot, good dialogue. fab fic. just one thing though, “Oh… Bullocks.” ....should be bolloks, lets not mess with one of the best bloody words england has to offer, spell checker be damned, lol.
this was funny had me laughing!!! Loved the fact that you didnt go for the obvious main charactewrs like Buffy or wolverine. I gather its a one off which I think is good but I reckon you should do a few more like this different characters meeting up and surprising the hell out of each other.
Review By [yakuit] • Date [5 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
