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Review of chapter "Part One" from raxadian
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They just love to dust Spike in Halloween fics, right?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [30 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Oxnate
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This is one of the best fanfiction stories ever written. Well paced with enough conflict to keep things interesting without being overwhelmed. Quite frankly, you can look far and wide without finding a better story.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Eight" from agnar
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The fight with the 2nd assassin? I gotta say bullshit. Xander may not have fully learned Goliaths fighting skills, but he is waaaaay stronger than a Slayer, meaning he's also way the fuck stronger than the assassin.

And oh yeah, he has talons that cut into STEEL for fucks sake, and you pulled this bullshit of him getting his ass handed to him like Angel did in canon? Bullshit, just so you could do the tender kissing moment thing, its no excuse to totally handicap Xanders abilities out of nowhere.

Frankly you seem to be making Xander a weakling now at every chance for some reason and its annoying. You had him ripping through a pack of minions like tissue paper in the Ford/club incident. But every fight since then he's suddenly a fucking pansy weaker than that twat Angel.
Review By [agnar] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five" from agnar
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Good fic so far, though Giles seemed especially stupid this chapter. A vampire breaks in to specifically steal one certian book that relates to vampire resurrection rituals, but is caught.

So Giles answer is to leave that book STILL laying about the fucking library? Not even put it under lock and key, or at his apartment or something? Far too dumb.

Though I've always been astounded that he left all his books and such laying about the library without any spells, wards or protections anyway, this just seemed a bit too far down the path of dumbness.
Review By [agnar] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from Yaguari
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I loved Gargoyles when it was showing on television, and I am especially appreciative of how you have captured Goliath's introspection and flavored it with Xander's worldview. Perhaps the most telling part of the chapter is how we've gone from Xan's stubborn, sullen disbelief in the previous chapter to his embrace of his new nature while flying. I look forward to enjoying the rest of the chapters you've already written, and though I am not finished with them yet, I want to also add my voice to those clamoring for a sequel.

You've managed to not only tell an entertaining story, you've threaded it through with the actually gestalt of the character basis. That takes a certain kind of love for the characters in question, but also a certain amount of talent. Bravo, I say!
Review By [Yaguari] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Ten" from mojtaba
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f this bs...seriously book wanted by vamps means books burned by fire... bs ritual....
Review By [mojtaba] • Date [17 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from hellixe
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Would love to see a see a sequel to this.
Review By [hellixe] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from deamon
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Ok I would love to see a sequel to this maybe how they handle the mayor and things or maybe in college and how they handle the inititiave.
Review By [deamon] • Date [30 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from aiyobi
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Hey read this storie like 2 or 3 times please make a sequal and let me know when you do please i loved it
Review By [aiyobi] • Date [8 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from AnFan
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I can't believe how positive it ended given the radical change Xander underwent. You did a great job describing how each character was impacted by his change, and their pulling together to help each other out. This is the kind of uplifting story I like to read. Even with the horrible things that happen (standard for a Buffy universe) the story still ended up feeling up-beat. Great job!
Review By [AnFan] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Hanzo
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♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.♥
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Ancalador
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Very good story. A bit disappointed that Xander didn't pull a Demona and get some daywalking in, but not enough that I think any less of the story. Looking forward to seeing what else you have to offer

Keep up the good work
Review By [Ancalador] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from LordSia
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Ah, how sweet...
WAFF for all and to all a Good Fight!
Review By [LordSia] • Date [30 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Hanzo
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will there be more
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [22 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dantrag
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I have to say that this is perhaps the best and the most balanced Xander/Halloween -story I have come accross so far. Yes, alot of people propably will complain about Xander getting anything usefull out of the halloween-deal but you don't over do it. The strengths and weaknesses are almost perfectly balanced (Stone during Day, Awake at Night. Improved Physical Abilities and The lack of real fighting skills. Mental and physical needs vs Mental and Physical problems).

You also manage to keep the personalities of each character in check and you leave enough for an open ending. Spike and Dru ran but I believe it might follow the same pattern except when Spike meets Initiative, he'd be dust. Buffy'd have no reason to have the bastard around.

Faith will still have issues, both with her insecurities and with Gwendolyn Post etc. She might still stray but Xander would be there for her.

The First Evil fight is propably the only fight that would really go differently. There is no Angel and the Medallion so they'd be in trouble. As much as I'd like a sequel, I also love the fact that your story is making me think of the different scenarios. Well done. 10 out of 10.
Review By [Dantrag] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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