Review of chapter "Dawn and Brenda--Light and Dark" from CPTSkip
I really liked this story of yours. I thought you did a fine job on both young women's characters and voices. I also liked all the "hidden" stuff that was going on behind their "normal" conversation. I would love to read more of these characters' interactions at some future date. Well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reviews Skip! I have plans to work this story and Brenda into the plotline for my big "Alien Apocalypse" story, but I haven't had time to do any writing because I'm so involved with my online gaming clan right now (we play 3 or 4 matches per week and I'm running a tournament). I will be posting the last few chapters of "Freaks and Geeks and Vampires" and some shorter stuff next week.
p.s. I originally posted this story and "The Six Feet Under Drabbles" last fall, but somehow they got deleted from the site.
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [11 Feb 05] • Not Rated