Cool story. It is certainly epic in scope, just like the Tolkein novels you are drawing from. I am having a little trouble following the story though, are some chapters out of order? Perhaps a list of characters would be useful - you seem to have given most of the major characters a 2nd identity and the extra names make it difficult to identify the participants in some scenes. Also it is apparent that English is not your first language and your writing might benefit from a native English speaking beta reader.
You certainly have a great imagination though!

Like it and Faith waking and not going after Buffy herself. Like the added slayer history and going after tptb.

Like Faith, and her gathering minions and allies, but no friends. Get Faith to get herself some new real friend(s), even if she says she can't, get one to slip through her defenses and become one. So long it's not one of the scoobs it's going to be fun.

Keep the parts coming

Thanks for the kind reviews. I will keep your recomendations in mind, though I'm not sure if I'll be able to follow them - I got the rough outline of a plot already, and so far I'm not sure who can be Faith's friend. Thank you for liking my story too.

Odd... I have trouble following the motivations in places.

So Buffy had an allergic attack to a substance that wasn't present, because her backstory had become entangled? Cool, I guess.

Nice way of handling Adam.

Loved the first chapter, great start and great potential, afterwards it was unfortunately all downhill for me.

and taking over the world? please, that just doesn't seem like something faith would do.

Yeah, this isn't my best of stories, I admit. Sorry that you didn't like it at all. But, BTW, the end of the first chapter has Faith say that she's going to destroy the world, not conquer it - try to pay more attention to it, all the same.

Great going, but conquer the world, you got to be kiding, doesn't Faith have better things to do than take over the world, so she conquer the world what then?

Revenge is a much better reason.

so Dawn isn't made into in Faiths sis by the monks, she looked more like Faith than Buffy.

Keep the chapters coming

conquer the world, you got to be kiding, doesn't Faith have better things to do than take over the world, so she conquer the world what then?

so Dawn isn't made into in Faiths sis by the monks, she looked more like Faith than Buffy.

Keep the chapters coming

Fantastic start, get more out soon.

Can't wait to see what Faith is going to do and will end up.