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Review of chapter "Intermission: the tower of Babel" from raxadian
Review:
A bit too mythology heavy, is taken over the story.
Comments from author:
True that, and that is one of the reasons why this story is currently on hiatus. Thank you for taking your time to review it, however.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Honored Ancestors - 1" from raxadian
Review:
Well, this just sucks.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from raxadian
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Well, things aren't going well...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from raxadian
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Yes, a blonde all right!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intermision: Visiting kin" from raxadian
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I am lost about what the heck is going on...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking the Sleeper" from raxadian
Review:
So, that explains her allergy...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Vampire Slayer in a grey land" from raxadian
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Buffy the naga? Oh boy, that tail gonna be a pain to learn how to use in battle.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "snags in the dark" from raxadian
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Things got way complicated...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why settle for Bronze?" from raxadian
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Wonder why Faith is there wanting to taking over the world... that was never her objective...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awakening Faith" from raxadian
Review:
Well, Faith is evil, but so she was when she awakened in canon anyway.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the honoured ancestors - 2" from Gideon
Review:
Cool story. It is certainly epic in scope, just like the Tolkein novels you are drawing from. I am having a little trouble following the story though, are some chapters out of order? Perhaps a list of characters would be useful - you seem to have given most of the major characters a 2nd identity and the extra names make it difficult to identify the participants in some scenes. Also it is apparent that English is not your first language and your writing might benefit from a native English speaking beta reader.
You certainly have a great imagination though!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Jun 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intermission: the tower of Babel" from Darklight
Review:
Like it and Faith waking and not going after Buffy herself. Like the added slayer history and going after tptb.

Like Faith, and her gathering minions and allies, but no friends. Get Faith to get herself some new real friend(s), even if she says she can't, get one to slip through her defenses and become one. So long it's not one of the scoobs it's going to be fun.

Keep the parts coming
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind reviews. I will keep your recomendations in mind, though I'm not sure if I'll be able to follow them - I got the rough outline of a plot already, and so far I'm not sure who can be Faith's friend. Thank you for liking my story too.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the Honored Ancestors - 1" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Odd... I have trouble following the motivations in places.

So Buffy had an allergic attack to a substance that wasn't present, because her backstory had become entangled? Cool, I guess.

Nice way of handling Adam.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the Honored Ancestors - 1" from Addlcove
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Loved the first chapter, great start and great potential, afterwards it was unfortunately all downhill for me.

and taking over the world? please, that just doesn't seem like something faith would do.
Comments from author:
Yeah, this isn't my best of stories, I admit. Sorry that you didn't like it at all. But, BTW, the end of the first chapter has Faith say that she's going to destroy the world, not conquer it - try to pay more attention to it, all the same.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Why settle for Bronze?" from Darklight
Review:
Great going, but conquer the world, you got to be kiding, doesn't Faith have better things to do than take over the world, so she conquer the world what then?

Revenge is a much better reason.

so Dawn isn't made into in Faiths sis by the monks, she looked more like Faith than Buffy.

Keep the chapters coming
Review By [Darklight] • Date [21 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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