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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Moderator)Teri
Review:
Just re-reading and old favorite. I wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed this story in the past and still enjoy it now. I hope that sometime in the future you will consider finishing it. I would enjoy getting to see Xander meet Miss Parker and for Jarod to find out about Broots and Emily. Thanks.
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [27 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from BlackAstral
Review:
Oh God! I know that the muses and plot bunnies sometimes aren't kind but i just read the entirety of this story and now that i'm hooked...... Truly hoping that someday you will return to this.
Review By [BlackAstral] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from razielCA
Review:
love the story hope you update soon
Review By [razielCA] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Blackett
Review:
Great story. Is such a shame that is not finished and it seems that it will never will. So sad if you ask me. You left so many questions unanswered. This story makes the Jarod-Miss Parker relation to be exactly how I've seen it or wished it would be.
Great job anyway.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [13 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from WolfWriter
Review:
This is a cool story! I love it!

I'd love to see the whole thing wrapped up with the Centre becoming a smoking hole in the ground.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [31 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Waverly
Review:
This story is fascinating and engaging, I could not stop reading! Please update again soon!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from theprincesjewel
Review:
Other than being irritated with myself for taking as long as I did to get the "Ghoulies with McGuyver" part, the only other annoyance during my reading was spelling errors. Must add this one to my tracking list.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.

I try to catch as many spelling errors as I can, and it is possible that some of them might be down to the difference between English UK and English US, but I apologise if they made it harder to enjoy the story.

Vlad.
Review By [theprincesjewel] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.

Vlad.
Review By [APS] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Elleria
Review:
Very muchly looking forward to the next part.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.

Vlad.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Gulanticus
Review:
This has been the most gruelsome chapter I probably have ever read. Will it get much darker than this?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.

While I have a policy of never saying never about anything, I seriously doubt that things will get any darker than this chapter.

Vlad.
Review By [Gulanticus] • Date [5 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Chaoskitten
Review:
waits with bated breath for the next update.

Can't wait for the shit to hit the fan *g* and for Xan and Jared to meet up with the Center folks.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.

Vlad.
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [2 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Infinix
Review:
Well that was a bit disturbing, Mr. Swallow seems like what Dexter could have been if he had been taken in by someone else besides his cop stepfather.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.

Inspiration for Mr. Swallow's psychotic tendencies came from reading the first two Dexter books, and I would have to say that your description is pretty accurate.

Vlad.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [1 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
Fitting demise for Mr. Lyle... I enjoyed the rest of the chapter as much... looking forward to more, of course!

T
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.

Vlad.
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [1 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Yay! An update!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're happy, but I must warn you that quick updating is not something that happens very often with my stories. The Voices are speaking to me again, which is a big improvement on the past few months, but how often they will speak is still one of life's mysteries.

Either way, I hope you enjoy the newest instalment.

Vlad.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [1 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is one terrific story. I have reread your story nearly every time you update just so I can enjoy it all once again. I especailly love how you write each and every character and your plotting is also excellent. I really hope you don't let Faith die. And I do look forward to seeing Jarrod and Miss Parker and their friends bring down the Centre. A small nuke would be really handy. Please keep writing as I really would love to see how everything turns out.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's more than appreciated.

Vlad.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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