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Review of chapter "Part 10" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Cool. You made me like the whole Lost story line. I never did like that show you made it interesting
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10" from Hanzo
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♥ satisfying♥
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [8 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10" from Duskie
Review:
Nice story! I hope someday you resume.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [20 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10" from (Recent Donor)astracindel
Review:
This is very cool. If you're worried about how Lost has progressed since you last updated/started this fic....IT'S YOUR STORY. You don't have to follow canon unless you really want to. If you have ideas that go in a totally different direction than canon, go for it! I really liked the bodies in the caves being "suspended vampires" and I think you were aiming for Jack's father being a manifestation of The First. Keep with that idea...don't worry about "The Others" or the survivors of the tail. Just work with your idea...it is YOUR FICTION.

You got a cool thing going here, hope you continue it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)astracindel] • Date [2 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10" from Elleria
Review:
More soon please!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [29 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10" from Kacey
Review:
Very good story. Hope you keep going with it.

I really like the fact that even though i have never seen Lost or know anything about it i still understand the story. So please add an update
Review By [Kacey] • Date [29 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10" from Bobboky
Review:
very very cool, i look forward to more
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10" from Chosenfire
Review:
I like this story a lot, its a great LOST crossover.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [21 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 10" from TealThanatos
Review:
Whoo, story goodness. I enjoyed it, although I've only seen one or two episodes of lost and didn't like that.
Review By [TealThanatos] • Date [20 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 10" from Sandi
Review:
7294530 repetitions divided by two (30 seconds per repetition) equals 3647265 minutes or 60787.75 hours or 2532.8229 days or 6 years, 11 1/2 months. Big difference from 16 years etc. Sorry the math nut strikes again. Good story though.
Comments from author:
Took the math for the repeating broadcast straight from the series, so if it's wrong, gotta take it up w/ JJ Abrams.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [20 Jul 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 9" from MagnusXXN
Review:
Cant help to read more. Its been too long since we had another update. Don't leave it here, theres soooo much more that could happen with this little twist of fate.


): )
Comments from author:
There you go. A July 06 update. Sorry work has been crazy & I haven't had a chance to get back to this. Hopefully I'll get a couple more parts up before Season 3 starts on Television.
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [16 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 9" from aussiemel
Review:
love it. please keep up the good work and update soon.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [6 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 9" from banner
Review:
I just found this story, and it's fascinating. I like the way you are keeping from turning Xander into some sort of superSurvivor type. He's perfectly in character.
Great story.
Review By [banner] • Date [22 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 9" from Grindhall
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getting better and better keep it up
Review By [Grindhall] • Date [31 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 8" from KevinSchultz
Review:
Heya - minor point on the "ring around the rosie" thing, which is something Giles would have known: it's not about the Black Death. The theory about it being about Bubonic Plague is fairly recent, but it's pretty much been disproven. (I brought this up in one of my Lit courses in college, and my prof pretty quickly shot me down.)

Here's the snoopes article on it:

http://www.snopes.com/language/literary/rosie.htm
Comments from author:
Ok, you got me. I should have fact checked it, but it worked for the story.
Review By [KevinSchultz] • Date [2 Feb 06] • Not Rated
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