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Review of chapter "Miss Memory" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story so far, I loved it. I can't wait until you update again.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [28 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Miss Memory" from fyretyger
Review:
You might want to check on the spelling of character names i.e. Draco's father's name is spelled L-U-C-I-U-S, no "O". You also might want to check out the Harry Potter Lexicon website for all the small details of the wizarding world that other people might nag about. Another piece of advice, stay consistent with the use of names and nicknames when writing them in a list. As an old professor of mine would say, "Details and descriptions are the way to making any story into a great one."
Review By [fyretyger] • Date [4 Feb 10] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Miss Memory" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome first chapter, I loved it.I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Miss Memory" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome first chapter, I loved it.I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [4 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Miss Memory" from coley
Review:
This is great I'd really like to see where you were planning on taking this... It's a good start and I don't think I've read a crossover with this spin on it yet... Oh and I like that, according to your summary, you planned on keeping it a Buffy/Angel ship
Review By [coley] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Miss Memory" from PrincessSparkle
Review:
hey
I know you haven't updated this story in like forever but I really love what you did so far.
please update soon cause it's something new and very interesting and from what you said B/A and that's just another reason why you should keep going, there just aren't enough good Buffy/angel stories around.
so please update
Review By [PrincessSparkle] • Date [1 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Miss Memory" from organicmagic
Review:
I really think you ought to re-read HP before you continue with this. Many of the names are spelled wrong e.g. Lucius Malfoy and that is very jarring trying to read a fic with very bad spelling, which is an easy thing to fix. If you aren't so great with remembering spellings, try keeping a copy of the books to hand so you can easily look them up or use any one of many sites like the HP lexicon that can help there. There is no structure here so far to the story, you aren't so much telling a tale as writing a set of cliffnotes of your plot, try adding in more descriptions, how things were rather than just spelling it out 1. 2. 3. style, a story needs to flow or the reader is stoppign and starting too much to enjoy your story.

Also your formatting needs to be re-thought. I think you could have a plotline here but personally, I couldn't finish the chapter because of the things I mentioned above.
Comments from author:
Sorry you couldn't finish reading it, and I will get back to this fic when I have time, but I'm relaly busy. If it makes you feel any better, I wrote this a long time ago. My sn i Goddessa39 at FF.net if you would like to read some of my other, current things. And there is a plot, sort of, and I've tried to read the books, but I can't get through them. *sigh* However, if it makes you feel any better, the HP/btvs fics (if any) that I have started lately are either mostly AU or only to where I've seen the movies.
Review By [organicmagic] • Date [27 Feb 05] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Miss Memory" from sissysara
Review:
hey gonna make this short and sweet
so! loved it and cant wait for the next chapter
Review By [sissysara] • Date [27 Feb 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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