You really make this work. So far you brought in all these different characters and managed to keep the story flowing while still focusing on the developing relationship between Dawn and Daniel. more please
Review By [purrfus] • Date [4 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Ha I love Daniel and Dawn.They're great.But *groans* did you have to put Xander and Buffy together.....LOL I know I know everyone has different taste but X/B is the ship I hate the most.Oh well Jack worrying over the fuel concoction that Sam and Fred made was the best part.
Review By [killjoy] • Date [9 Jun 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Hee. I love the part with the grill. Sam and Fred together would do something that scary-smart. And Dawn and Daniel are so cute together. Extra points for the Sam/Jack 'shippiness. Wonderful story.
Review By [Deanie] • Date [25 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alis Volat Propiis" from Deanie
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Hee. "Oregon Statehood Day" -- that's got to be the best non-Valentine's Valentine's Day Holiday I've ever seen. And "objets d'alien" is one of the best phrases ever. Wonderful story.
Review By [Deanie] • Date [25 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
That was fun - even for a rabid anti-S/J'shipper like me! The people were warm and funny and reasonable. I loved the Daniel/Dawn interaction (esp. Daniel keeping Dawn's schedule on his calendar,) and The Grill Incident reminds me of Rex Stout's famous statement - "There's only one thing on this earth that truly frightens me - a physicist with a new trick." Please continue!
Review of chapter "Alis Volat Propiis" from Charley
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I really enjoyed both parts of this story. Will there be more? I'd love to know who threatens Daniel and with what and if anyone returns the favour with Dawn. Also, how does Jack and Sam's not-date go and does Buffy say yes to Xander?
There isn't enough Dawn/Daniel fic and this worked so well. Please write more :)
Review By [Charley] • Date [5 Aug 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I had to read this again when I went through SG fics. I have to say... one of my favourites, completely. I love Dawn as a general rule, and I love Daniel. Them together? Blows my mind. Your Daniel is just unbelievably cute and so... Daniel! You've got his voice down perfectly and his hesitancy is just so real. I wanted to hug him, so much. And Dawn, her strength and also her vulnerability. Her coyness. I loved it all. So much.
Review By [Calex] • Date [18 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]