Review of chapter "If Hammond Were Here" from Rune
Review:
Nice little story, and it answers some questions that I had for the main story, the first in this series, the one that's not complete yet. This is complete so you get a 10 rating. I only give 10s for complete stories. Thanks for the fic. :)
Review By [Rune] • Date [11 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If Hammond Were Here" from deathgeonous
Review:
Heh. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If Hammond Were Here" from spring
Review:
I love it.
Review By [spring] • Date [21 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If Hammond Were Here" from Sulien
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*snicker-snicker-giggle* Daniel's just lucky that Willow didn't summon that bit of translation paperwork from him. I really love this series!
Review of chapter "If Hammond Were Here" from Mari
Review:
Okay--I freely admit that I have trouble visualizing Willow married to Jack O'Neill. However, once I locked that disbelief into a small room for a short period, I did particularly like these bits:
"Words that no one dared point out to him that he was using, for fear that he would stop and deprive them all of the utter hilarity of it." He would pick up words. It would be funny. They would try not to tell him.
“We’re on a military base – can’t you guys just act like you’re the United Army of Willow for once?” “Want us to salute the National Flag of Willow, too?” For some reason, (maybe it was supposed to) my brain went to a slightly dirty place here. It had a snicker there, though.
I also really enjoyed the bit where Jack was figuring out how and if he should try to explain those three to the airman.
Okay that was an 11 as far as I'm concerned. As I just finished all the available chapters of your other Willow/Jack fic this was the perfect after note. I would almost venture that writing fun sexy little future chapters like this make you want to write more of the "alpha" fic simply because getting to this point could be so fun. Ta!
Review By [MetropolisRising] • Date [29 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If Hammond Were Here" from Deanie
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Hee... very cute. I'd love to see more in this 'verse...
Sulien
MetropolisRising
