Loved the chapter

This was very good, so it's very bad that it seems to be dead. Well, thanks for writing what you did of this, bye for now.

I have enjoyed the whole story and am looking forward to the rest,
so I hope that you can continue to update this story.
Thanks for your creativity and imagination.

a very nice fic

Really enjoying this story. Was looking for a good AB xover to get into. It flows very well and has nice characterisation. Hope it has not been abandoned? If not update soon pleeeassee
mac x

Enjoying this story, would like to see it continued

I was really glad to find this story. It flows really well, moves quickly and I like how you manage to pull out the essence of charachters when introducing them. Its fun to watch Dawn in Anita's early role as an investigator and I'm looking forward to the rest.

I've been keeping up with your Astral Anne stories for a while (and enjoying them), but hadn't checked this one out until today. So far, it's been quite interesting. I love the Spike/Dawn/Xander interactions and throwing in the various characters from the Anita Blake books just adds to it.
I'm curious to see where you're going with this, so consider this review a plea for you to update again and eventually finish the story! *grin*
-Ali

hello
i've been reading your story from the beginning and i have to say it's wonderfully written. i like the way you wrote dawn into anitaverse and i like the plot. also you have endeared yourself to me with In Flanders Fields. I didn't bother checking, but maybe someone else reviewed and said that in Canada this poem is recited every Nov 11 at 11:11 am in memoriam of the great war. It's one of those supremely Canadian things, beginning in late october veterans give out red poppies and we donate money and wear them and at school there are assemblies to commemorate this day.
I hope Jason and Dawn get to be a proper couple. Also, I think you're writing Spike fine, only a bit cautious. Maybe trust yourself more that his voice comes through. Because you call him a master vamp, get Anita worried about him yet say in earlier chapters something to effect that he doesn't like dancing but has to. When has Spike ever obeyed someone, especially when he didn't want to? He's a loose cannon, even with the soul having. But he does sound like himself.
I like that Dawn is a true smartass and there's something very Anita like in her tone of voice.
Please update soon!

The more I read of this story the more I like it. Please, I want more.

Hi there;

I just wanted to let you know that I've just read what you've written so far, and quite enjoyed it. I can't wait to read the rest!
Eleanor

Great to see this story continued. Am curious as to how Dawn's dimensional abilities will tie into the denouement.

Short but sweet! Air is next eh? Keep up the good work.

I have to justify the title there somewhere, don't I? Glad you like.

It has been a while since I commented on your story, and I apologize for that. Especially since I really am enjoying your story. I like your characterizations and your plot is getting darn scary. I hope you continue writing as I really want to find out just what the heck is going on. Thanks for the jolly dark entertainment.

Thank you for reading and being brave enough to continue sharing your opinions.

Good.