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Two (Former) Demons and A Wish

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Review of chapter "Two (Former) Demons and A Wish" from snoopydancer
I really like this. You write dialect well and set it up for a good continuation. I think it would be useful to add a little description though, or at least who's saying what. I was occasionally confused on who was speaking. Please continue!
Review By [snoopydancer] • Date [11 Mar 05] • Not Rated
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