Review of chapter "Consequences of Choice" from
RuneReview:
This is a Unique story. And a good one too!
Now if Buffy is wishing away vampires she should be made to run the Labyrinth at least once.
Sure Xander the Goblin King can just turn them into goblins or whatever creature he can use but its lazy on her part and he should do something about it.
And of course since its a good story, sequel please.
Review By [
Rune] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Consequences of Choice" from
MariReview:
This is such an odd little story--you don't see many YAHF that have Xander be an almost bad guy. Plus, you managed to make it such a bizarre mix of horrifying, heartbreaking, and funny. Willow living with the guilt of Xander's new life, Xander being stuck as the Goblin King (Does he wear gray spandex and have the David Bowie hair?), and Buffy wishing (hee) vampires away all worked.
Review By [
Mari] • Date [5 Nov 06] • Not Rated
