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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Vilkath
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Not a bad idea, rather 'rough' in details and dialog but the basic idea has merit. That at some point people would step up and say the world is more important then Buffy's rather disturbing relationship with a 200+ year old corpse, at age what 16?

Most this story moved a little fast and was way to blunt in character's reactions but one my favorite bits was how Xander attacked Angelus. It just makes sense to go out in the day time to raid a vampire nest or base, would cut down on 99% of the Slayers problems of people running away and ploting revenge if it's day time out side. It's one worst flaws in buffy-verse imo, that they never really take an offensive action against the vampires in Sunnydale, let alone the world. Kill a few fledglings that are dumb enough attack buffy at night, what ever evil plans might involve them.. but do nothing actively wipe out the vampires from town. For being only person in world really blessed to fight vampires Buffy barely did crowd control in one small town and left rest world to rot.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from spring
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You are evil for not updating this wonderful fic! I love what our have so far PLEASE please please please update this fic; that or let me know if you have just quit writing it. Again I love this wonderful fic.
Review By [spring] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Bill
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Great start!
Review By [Bill] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from anpu
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THANK YOU !!!!! EXCELLENT, INTELLIGENT, TOP QUALITY STORY. PLEASE, I CHALLENGE YOU TO MAKE THIS STORY AT LEAST 100 LENGTHY STORIES.
Review By [anpu] • Date [7 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AnthonyR
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good story. update it.
Review By [AnthonyR] • Date [20 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from musiclover
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it would be so cool if you finished this
Review By [musiclover] • Date [18 Mar 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Bobboky
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excellent i hope to see more of this
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)InvisibleA
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i love it update soon!
Review By [(Past Donor)InvisibleA] • Date [11 Jun 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Kirallie
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Interesting story, please update!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [16 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from banner
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That sets up a lot of possibilities...
Review By [banner] • Date [11 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Kirallie
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Please update soon!!!!!! Great story! Xander did what was necessary, Buffy needs to get over it. Will he try to kill Cole? Will Cole go bad like in the series? If he doesn't hopefully the two can be friends.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [2 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from spacey
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mmm, leo and xander meet!
Review By [spacey] • Date [29 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Elleria
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Looking forward to the next bit. Update SOON!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [18 Mar 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Blackguard
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This is a fairly intersting fic so far, please update soon
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [18 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Alltorian
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A good fic, a little scetchy on the storyline in some places and and your characterizations are a bit monochrome. Still overall it has a solid base for a great story. Please continue writing.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [17 Mar 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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