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Review of chapter "VII" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Again, I am astounded that I didn't review this great story the first time I read it, but hopefully you'll forgive me, b/c I really do appreciate this. I love the luck spell, as well as the aftermath "guess they had their war"... then, sadly the potential now a slayer escaped. Now, on to rereading the rest. I've occasionally reread old 'favorites' and for whatever reason, not made it all the way through. This, however, is just that good that the twists and the characters hold my attention.

Thanks for what you write, and all the contributions you continue to make to tth.

Blue
Comments from author:
Glad you're continuing to enjoy the series.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VII" from spk
Review:
WOW! Just discovered this. Don't know how I missed it because I'd read the other 3 stories. Great job integrating Faith & Willow into the CSI world. I love how you handled the CSI group's reactions to their past stories. LOVED the epilogue. Nice twist with Patricia's escape. :)
Comments from author:
There are a few more short stories, including another encounter with Patricia.
Review By [spk] • Date [6 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VII" from Dragonelf
Review:
Another Excellent story.


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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "VII" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh I like how you wrote the Willow/Faith team i this story. The crazy Potential was done very well.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thanks - I'm glad I got that idea in early - anticipated Angel S5 and the comic quite well.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [14 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "VII" from mendenbar
Review:
Wonderful series. I eagerly anticipate additions in this same AU. Thanks for writing.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [22 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VII" from meatshield
Review:
couldn't help notice your "I'm British, so is my spelling" slogan... i may American but i spent over four years living in the Netherlands and seven years in the middle east were english is british english not american english. it is nice to see things spelled correctly :) for a change...

ps i get yelled at at my college for spelling all the time.
Review By [meatshield] • Date [27 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "VII" from Ansku
Review:
Another great story :) Too bad there aren't more of these longer ones, short stories feel never as satisfying to me...
Review By [Ansku] • Date [19 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VII" from (Past Donor)AmarinRose
Review:
I like this characterization of Faith and the possibilities about other Potentials have major issues. It's always seemed to me like the Slayers couldn't be all perfect, especially if they had the WC fucking with their heads.
Review By [(Past Donor)AmarinRose] • Date [13 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VII" from Elleria
Review:
Going to read the next bit tomorrow.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "VII" from arkeus
Review:
Very good seire, very good story, like all of what you have done. Of course, i am all in favour of all powerful willow, but i guess that would simplify things too much :-)
Review By [arkeus] • Date [26 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "VII" from remey
Review:
i tried reviewing before and it didn't seem to work- darn... anyways, this was a great story.
although i have to point out that as my own name is Rachel Jones, i was thourouly creeped out.
(don't have any siblings though...) >_<
but nice work.
Review By [remey] • Date [22 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "VII" from LadyCarpathian
Review:
That is just too wicked. I really likes. More Please!
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [19 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "VII" from Ezmerelda
Review:
I've never actually watched CSI, but I used to watch documentaries about forensics, etc. If CSI the show is as interesting as you've portrayed it, I'm going to have to look it up and watch it.

Thanks for writing ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [16 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Potential Problem" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
I've been reading your whole series, and I gotta say that they are very enjoyable. I love CSI and Buffy, and you do a great job of combining the two. One little problem, however. In "Potential Problem," you have Faith talk about her first watcher taking her out to stake a vampire before she is actually called to be the Slayer. You refer to the watcher as a he, but in the episode "Faith, Hope and Trick," she specifically refers to her original watcher as a she. Just a little heads up for you.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [29 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Potential Problem" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
If I get any complaints about not posting the next part of TKW:HW tomorrow, I'm referring them to you. It's all your fault, 'cause I just spent the evening reading your B:TVS/CSI stories. I'm looking forward to the future stories I hope you're still planning to write.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [24 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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