Review of chapter "Final Chapter" from Oakheart
Good banter, dialogue that flowed well from specific characters... this is excellent. I especially liked Xander assessing the inherent danger of adding more crazies (potentially) to the Hellmouth. Kudos.
Review By [Oakheart
] • Date [10 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Chapter" from Blackguard
despite the fact that this story appears to be several years old I feel that I must make a comment on Xander becoming a Green Lantern. Now, I have no problems with Xander being a member of the Corp, in fact i greatly encourage the DC crossover fics, but given my ever growing love of the Green Lantern comics I fell that I must point out a couple of things. First, Green Lanterns have a sector of space to patrol, not just one planet. If a GL of a certain sector died and his ring went to Xander, it stands to reason that Xander would be tapped to replace the GL in his/her sector. Second, one does not need to say an oath to change into their uniform, it is just something that they do at will, a GL's oath is usually said while they are charging their ring, another thing you seem to have forgotten to put in. It also stands to reason that since you included Kyle as GL, it is likely to take place after Hal Jordan was possessed by Parallax and took out most of the Green Lantern Corp, so if memory serves there were no new Green Lantern's chosen at the time, I believe that the Corps were not rebuilt until after the rebirth of Hal. Please keep in mind this is not a flame, I actually enjoyed this fic and found it to be a fun story. I just happen to feel that if you are gonna do a crossover such as this, you should not leave out important parts of the material you are crossing over with.
Review By [Blackguard
] • Date [15 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Chapter" from Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Chapter" from Damia
I really liked this story (and it's prequal) I've always been rather fond of Harley. Her and Ivy and CatWoman. lol, I fond of the villainess temperament. Write more soon.
Review By [Damia
] • Date [14 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Chapter" from VillageOrchid
Ah, smell the AUey goodness. Nice use of AU elements interacting with cannon plot and characters. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [23 May 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Chapter" from Elleria
Awesome! Xander is a Green Latern...I love this story. Get the sequel out soon!!
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [18 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]