I have just reread this story and it was just as good as the last time I read it. Anyway a good story is always worth rereading. :D
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Dec 09] • Not Rated
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
This story looks pretty good so far and I am certain that the rest of the story will be just as good.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Pretty good story. I look forward to the continuing adventures of the group. *ahem* Spelling police - mien means facial expression, mane is what a horse has. *grins* No flame, just pointing out an error. What kind of reviewer would I be if I didn't try to make you a better author? See you soon.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [3 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Just a guess: Iron Gargoyle Clan armour? Oh, well. I'll find out soon enough. Enjoying the story. But, oh man, those awful ancient Greek versions of modern brands. That had to be about the only thing I really disliked about the series. LOL Later.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
First off, a couple of edits. You might want to mark what is thought processes and what is just commentary. When Xander and Brooklyn first arrive in the past, Xander has this whole conversation with himself, but it isn’t marked that way. Bit confusing. Also, you might want to check your verb tenses. It switches between past and present tense several times. Next, there are connotation issues, such as: their/they’re/there and your/you’re.
Off to read the next parts....
Comments from author:
Oops. Next time I'll be more careful. Hope you liked the rest of the fic, and continue to do so.
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [15 Aug 05] • Not Rated
well, that's new. So this time it's Brooklyn bringing trouble to the group...and not Xander. Though Xander was periously close to bringing the wrath of Gabrielle upon him...so...I'm not sure which scenario is worse.
Very good chapter, can't wait to see how the trio (well...4 including Joxer) get out of this situation
More soon please!
Comments from author:
Not every sub-plot focuses on xander. The thing is, when you're doing a canon fic, you have to explain how the episodes started the way they did. According to the next episode, 'If the Shoe Fits,' Joxer appears at the beginning with the girls. Yet they never told how he met up with them. So to make the episode seem part of this fic, I had to find a way to get Joxer into the mix. And I thought Brooklyn should see how the gargoyles of Greece acted.
Review By [MarcD] • Date [17 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I've got to ask, but only because its driving me crazy.
Why are those weird marks on you fic, I see them all the time and I just have to know.
Comments from author:
Well, I don't know what the problem was, but I re-editted it and fixed the problem. Hopefully, it's better now. Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you like this fic.
White Werewolf
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [22 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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