I just read this for the first time and I'm hoping there will be more at some point. The potential for slapstick with THOSE 4 being pregnant and Xander having to run around for them should be hilarious. Poor Dawn's being left out; according to the prophecy it looks like even Faith will be getting in on the action.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [26 Nov 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Lol! Now this is a funny situation, but very true to Xander's character. I hope you write more as I really want to see how Xander takes care of all his "girls" and kids.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Mar 05] • Not Rated
hehehee, good part, but you left off a part - "You guys did WHAT while I was in LA?!" should be followed by, "and you didn't think to invite me, too?" ... kidding, really - Dawn's too young. More, soon.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [22 Mar 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]