Hm, nice flow to the story. Wouldn't mind finding out how they all met and why kidnapping Connor was necessary. Only real problem I saw was Ginny-if you are going to make her true name into a focal point you have to have it correct-it is Ginerva, not Virginia. If I remember right, JKR named her after Guinevere (since it's an alternate spelling), not Virgin/Virginia.
Review By [zili] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kidnapping Connie" from SamDragon
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Curious now,want next chapter so can figure out what is going on.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kidnapping Connie" from JennMarie
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Very cute! If you get the urge to continue, I'll feel the urge to read! Loved the way you wrote everyone... and the gratuitous caffeine addiction was fun too!
Review By [JennMarie] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Interesting... well, fun in fact!!! But what about some little background? Like, one, how did Draco and Gin come together, how did they meet Dawn and Connor? How did the Golden Trio react to the news of Ginny snogging Drake?
Kiara