Jinni! You know, I beta'd this eons ago...but I just watched the movie tonight and boy, does this resonnate even more. Really fantastic work. I've gotta say, for as much as Gabriel was screwed up in this movie, I found her (it?) fascinating. Thanks for taking on such a complex character!
Review By [Clannadlvr] • Date [15 Aug 05] • Not Rated
A rousing two thumbs up! Very clever connection, and a wonderful way to see one of my favorite characters- Doyle will ever be missed. Gabriel sounded very true to character as well, and you've filled in a nice motivation for him/her to have committed the act that cast her out of His graces. All in all, a nicely woven short. Thank you.
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Review By [houses] • Date [26 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I don't know what you were worried about. I think you did a very good job capturing Doyle's voice. And a woo hoo for Gabriel. Gabriel was the best part of that movie.
Comments from author:
Oh - thank you! I was so terrified of this piece. I'm glad that you liked. And,yes, Gabriel was the best part of the movie. She scared the hell out of me.
Love the tiny addition you made and I'm so psyched I got to read this. Lovely job, my dear!
Comments from author:
Tee hee. Glad you liked the little change. I thought about sending it back to you for a second beta'ing, but didn't want to impose. Glad it went over well.
Review By [Clannadlvr] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Not Rated
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