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Broken Wings

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Review of chapter "Broken Wings" from Dragonelf
Review:
Great story! I hope you will get inspired to write a sequel or two.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [10 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Broken Wings" from lilsis
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Loved it, although I thought Gabriel was supposed to be a guy. Can you make a sequel or continue this story?
Review By [lilsis] • Date [26 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Broken Wings" from Clannadlvr
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Jinni! You know, I beta'd this eons ago...but I just watched the movie tonight and boy, does this resonnate even more. Really fantastic work. I've gotta say, for as much as Gabriel was screwed up in this movie, I found her (it?) fascinating. Thanks for taking on such a complex character!
Review By [Clannadlvr] • Date [15 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Broken Wings" from banner
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I think I'll rent that movie.
I *like* Doyle's commentary. Well done.
Review By [banner] • Date [21 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Broken Wings" from (Past Donor)houses
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A rousing two thumbs up! Very clever connection, and a wonderful way to see one of my favorite characters- Doyle will ever be missed. Gabriel sounded very true to character as well, and you've filled in a nice motivation for him/her to have committed the act that cast her out of His graces. All in all, a nicely woven short. Thank you.

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Review By [(Past Donor)houses] • Date [26 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Broken Wings" from WhiteWolf
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I haven't seen the movie, but now that I've read your story I'm curious abou the movie.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [26 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Broken Wings" from cwolf
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Unique.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Broken Wings" from echo
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I don't know what you were worried about. I think you did a very good job capturing Doyle's voice. And a woo hoo for Gabriel. Gabriel was the best part of that movie.
Comments from author:
Oh - thank you! I was so terrified of this piece. I'm glad that you liked. And,yes, Gabriel was the best part of the movie. She scared the hell out of me.
Review By [echo] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Broken Wings" from Clannadlvr
Review:
Yay! And also? Yay!!!

Love the tiny addition you made and I'm so psyched I got to read this. Lovely job, my dear!
Comments from author:
Tee hee. Glad you liked the little change. I thought about sending it back to you for a second beta'ing, but didn't want to impose. Glad it went over well.
Review By [Clannadlvr] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Not Rated
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