Review of chapter "Things Fall Apart" from hellmouthprincess
It seems like you should feel sorry for her, but even in all her grief she's still so stuck in her ideals that it makes it hard.
I do like the idea that after all that drama, it was actually Neville who was meant to destroy the dark lord!
Nice fic, there were a few things that I felt went over my head, I'm guessing facts of the RPG, but overall I like it.
Comments from author:
The hard part of writing a fic based on a RPG is making the story readable to people not involved in the game. This fic was a labor of love for me. The game was dying a slow death, and I felt Narcissa's story was just incomplete. I'm very glad you enjoyed reading it, and thank you very much for taking the time to review. :)
Review By [hellmouthprincess
] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated