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Review of chapter "Things Fall Apart" from (Past Donor)hellmouthprincess
Review:
It seems like you should feel sorry for her, but even in all her grief she's still so stuck in her ideals that it makes it hard.
I do like the idea that after all that drama, it was actually Neville who was meant to destroy the dark lord!
Nice fic, there were a few things that I felt went over my head, I'm guessing facts of the RPG, but overall I like it.
Comments from author:
The hard part of writing a fic based on a RPG is making the story readable to people not involved in the game. This fic was a labor of love for me. The game was dying a slow death, and I felt Narcissa's story was just incomplete. I'm very glad you enjoyed reading it, and thank you very much for taking the time to review. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)hellmouthprincess] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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