Now THIS is the way to end this story! X-Man has found a partner in prankdom, Red and Hank are talking, and Dawn and Marie are together. And I think that Logan and Faith might end up together in the future. Way to GO!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Way to go WANDA! Sometimes you have to tell off family to get your point across. And that is what Wanda has done. Maybe D needs to do that somewhat to get her point across to B that she can live her own life and not be on a leash all the time.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
BATTLE MODE: MASK! Its time to prepare for a fight the likes of which is rarely seen. Even Magus agent in place is going to have her share of problems this day! Let the BATTLE COMMENCE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
OH JOY! Just when they were getting set up for demons, who steps in to muck up things up but Magneto. Well, the shoes are dropping and its time to prepare for war!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Beginning of the End" from Harry
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Well, B did come up with a good idea. But I smell trouble with Magneto and the Moorlocks. He is going to be in for a major fight if he thinks he is going to get Faith! Let the BATTLE COMMENCE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Dawn, you should have realized that when you cast that spell, it was going to have repricussions. And they are starting with B and the gang showing up at Xaviers. And when Spike shows up as well, then things are REALLY getting bad!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
*Shakes head* Marie, Marie, Marie. You are getting all mixed up in your feelings toward Dawn. And I think that Dawn had best make some peace with Faith before B and the Slayerettes come in and risk a major disagreement with Xavier!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
*Hits the Red Alert button* Its time to go to FULL BATTLE MODE! If Dawn did that spell, and everything hit the fan, like we saw, then its time to call in ALL the help we can! Demons and all sorts of nastys are going to be heading for Winchester. And D is going to HAVE to explain things to both Willow AND her sister!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I think that Logan and Faith are going to make a interesting couple. As for Dawn and Marie, I think that they both have a lot of emotional baggage that needs to be dealt with.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Completely Normal...yes..." from Harry
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Oh Hank, if only you knew how CLOSE you are to the truth about these two! They have been involved in some major battles, ones you can only imagine!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I LIKE the idea of F and Logan getting it on! They would make a great couple. As for Marie and Dawn, I think Dawn needs to take some of her own advice to heart. Make peace, if possible., with her sister. Otherwise, there is no telling what will happen in the future.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]