Review of chapter "Meeting the pack 1- first contact" from TwoBlackDragons
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Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start. And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author.
Comments from author:
I haven't been able to write My muse decided to abandon me in retaliation for taking a creative writing course. I have been trying for years to find my inspiration again, but it refuses to come out of hiding. Trying my best to get back to writing.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [30 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the pack 1- first contact" from fojee
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I like the tidbit about his cousin getting infected by a blood transfusion. (And the dog-carrier! Teehee.)
Oz speaks a little too much, but I guess it would be difficult to explain it all in his usual laconic manner. So when does he meet Anita and the vamps?
Review of chapter "Meeting the pack 1- first contact" from VillageOrchid
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Interesting, though slow developing. Is Oz blind to the kind of sensing the others are able to do - both mystical and hyper-sensical? Was he just not trained? Was this a part of the hell-mouth energy that keeps him from sensing the others on the level that they sense him? Is it an interpretation thing -- since he's so much stronger he just files them away as "not a real threat"? Thanks for sharing the tale. Looking forward to more.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The new Wolf- A home for christmas" from VillageOrchid
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The non-beast part of Oz is a good man. I like how you have him being straight forward about being invited into the Ulfric's home -- and how you have intrigue on the mind of Richard.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the pack 1- first contact" from spacey
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ohh, poor Ozzie! maybe he should wear a plaque around his neck that reads: "Lone [packless?] wolf from Mouth of Hell. Infected by teething toddler. Pacifistic but vicious when threatened. Treat with care."
fojee