i havent read this chapter yet but there's some mistakes. first its Prologue. secone i dont think you did the math. if you have superman dieng during world war 2, there is no way he can be xander's father, his grandfather maybe, but not his father.
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First yeah you got me on the spelling of the chapter, but I did do the math. All I can say is that time travel via Luthor device was involved.
Review By [AnthonyR] • Date [29 May 07] • Not Rated
The Lantern will not function for anyone Ethan would wish to empower, is my attitude. I take that particular mythology very seriously, for some reason.
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Not too familiar with Golden Age GL beyond the basics, but I know that in the Silver Age a lot of jerks and even evil people used the ring so that's how I figured it could work.
Review By [orangemike] • Date [29 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I love your story. Nice to see an Olson still with the Daily Planet. Your story has an interesting air of both sadness and renewel. I can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
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You know I didn't know that was the type of feel I was puting into the story, I'm just writing what seems aproperate. Thanks for giving voice to this feeling others had comented on.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Not Rated
This is such a wonderful story and series! I love the way that things are going so far and I look forward to seeing what happens when Xander meets up with the others and their decendants.
Thanks Calia
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Not everyone will have a decendent, as you will see, but I'm glad you are enjoying this.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [23 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I am still enjoying your story. What is with Xander and super powered women? They either want to kill him or make him their little brother. I hope Xander and Diana Jr. can work things out. Lol!
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Prehaps in time, but for the next few stories I'm just going to enjoy having a female character that gives Superman a hard time.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Its cold down there" from CPTSkip
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This is a lovely bitter-sweet story. I like the idea of SuperXander and I think you are doing a good job showing his emotional reaction to all the trama in his life. I wonder what his Kryptonian name is? I just hope some of the other Scoobies eventually get neat superpowers also. Lol!
Comments from author:
Glad you are enjoying it! Xanders Kryptonian name is Jo-El, with the birth name of Joel for us humans.
Don't worry at least one other member will have a conection with the JSA. Maybe. It all depends on how you look at it really. (Insane Laughter)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 May 05] • Not Rated
Is he really Supermans son? Didn't have a clue with most of the first chapter, i'm assuming it's how some died but not sure who. Keep going!!!!
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Who the prolog was talking about will be revealed later, so don't worry too much about it. As for the Supermans son thing, the how that is possable will be revealed in the next chapter.
Review By [Stormy] • Date [2 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm really enjoying this story, and amd looking forward to more soon. One quick question tho. Is Superman in this story a mixture of the different Comicbook versions? Just wondering as I *think* the Golden Age Superman had his Fortress in the mountains outside of Metropolis, while the Silver Age had his in the Artic (complete with huge key disguised as an airplane navigation marker), while the current version has his in the Antartic. Anywho, no matter which version, please more soon.
Phil
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Its mostly taken from Generations 1 and 2 with some stuff from my imagination mixed in.
Review By [PhilH] • Date [30 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I thought this was an excellent start to your story. I have no freaking idea of what is going on, but I sure want to learn. Please write more.
Comments from author:
More will come in time. As for the not knowing what is going on I can understand that, and the history I gave may throw some people because I made Ford the big bad when Spike and Dru skipped town.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Apr 05] • Not Rated