Dude, I hate you. I really do. I thoroughly and completely despise you. You are a tool of Satan. His wrench, or possibly even his paintscraper. I mean hell, ya MUST've sold your soul to be able to write like this.
...DAMN YOU!
...I love the story. :)
Write more soon! -The Cardboard Moon
Review By [WriteTheGoodWrite] • Date [19 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Lovely sequel! I think you did a wonderfuk job on how they would both react to and deal with the pregnancy. The Locke parts were spot-on too. I particularly liked the last line, the irony and logic in what she says. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Fan] • Date [27 Sep 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
A good sequel! It's up to par with the first story. Well written and good characterization. I like reading a true to character Faith; she's so feisty. Good job, D
Review By [Delphit] • Date [21 May 05] • Not Rated
A great sequel. I think you captured both Sayid and Faith really well. Faith especially. This is one of the best Faith characterisations that I've read.
Hey, an interesting note: Locke wouldn't have offered her the liver unless he was trying to kill her, or he didn't know that a polar bear liver contains between 15,000 and 30,000 units of vitamin A. More than enough to kill a human. It's also a pretty ugly way to die; at least from what I heard of a story about a pair of hunters in Alaska who didn't know and died from eating the liver.
Review By [Beneficia] • Date [13 Apr 05] • Not Rated
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