Review of chapter "Epilogue (Mallory)" from littleoldme
Review:
Flawless. This one had me in stitches. You managed to keep everyone in character, but at the same time had enough of a hint of parody to keep me laughing. Kristy and her Slayer Squad ("Bear Group" HAHAHAHA) and Jessi thinking she was meant to be a slayer (so in character after the whole Peter Pan debacle) were great. Mary Anne and the guidebook thing, plus Mallory's overdramatic writing samples. And Stacey in love with yet another older guy! And Claudia's demon designs! It was perfect. Really.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [31 Mar 06] • Not Rated
This story just gets better and better. You have the all the characters down so well. I could just see the look on Faith's face as Mallory explained the BSC's slang terms. Also love the idea of the Super Slayers Club. I look forward to reading more.
You know, this is quite possibly my favorite story of the moment. These were my favorite books as a kid, and this story brings back fond fond memories. The story idea is one of the more original things I've ever seen, and what's more is, the characters are actually true to character! So thank you, and keep up the good work.
Review By [AnanasComosus] • Date [18 May 05] • Not Rated
This is such a cool idea! I loved the BSC books when I was a kid. I owned more than fifty of them. I like your choice of Mallory as the Slayer and the obvious influence that Andrew has had on her writing style. I look forward to reading more.