Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Dragonwolftiger
Very nice, engaging story. I look forward to more of this.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger
] • Date [10 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AnFan
This story seems to be more of a short story format, but it is a fun little read. Will you be going back and visiting any of your other older work? Since I found your updated WoT cross, I checked out the rest of your posted work. I really liked your writing style and wanted to see what else you had that was entertaining.
I wish I was better at analyzing written works so I could offer suggestions, but I really sucked at English classes right from the start in grade school. Even though I went through college and even took classes like technical writing, it's always been like pulling teeth to me and I never could focus on it much. All I really have are feelings based on having read a "god awful" amount of fiction. Been reading since before I was a teen (wow, wayback machine needed for that flashback).
You've got a good flow and an easy to read style of writing. I like it a lot. I hope to see more work from you soon. I'm reading your most recent post next. Hopefully it will inspire me to give you a review.
Review By [AnFan
] • Date [11 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from serenityselena
interesting start ....
hope to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena
] • Date [5 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from sparrowhawk
Great characterization, you did a great job grabbing who they are. I like the story and I can't wait to read more.
Review By [sparrowhawk
] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from jammiesMM
This is very good I hope you continue this story I would like to read the rest of it
Review By [jammiesMM
] • Date [26 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of story "Where Man Fears To Tread" from Anonymous Reviewer
Chapter one review
Buffy didn't get her questions one and two answered when she asked them. Guessing she gets them answered later on by herself, which I hope she shares with the rest of the team since demons they can handle...but aliens?
Giles is weird, as in not Gile like.
Uh, understanding Xander and military guy, but not understanding the multiple styles ... and some not developed on Earth thing.
Not getting why Willow would be able to beat two slayers and a full out military Xander in a group attack.
I understand suspension of disbelief and all, but I'm gonna have to say that I don't think the background of them have been explained will enough to give them the skills you have them displaying.
There's a lot of assumptions that the reader has to make. Like Faith's being in the group and being a good guy, while having the last name Wilkins...so change of sides once more for the good guys. Reclaiming a part in the group even after body snatching, beating certain individuals up and such.
It's not a bad story, just a lot left to be explained.
Why didn't Willow go to college? If she did, how could she be such a part of the group...and the Tara thing and the Oz break up never happened? We know she's good with breaking into a computer system, but when did she learn how to create software programs...especially for something like the Stargate program computers?
Maybe I'm putting too much thought into it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment