Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from serenityselena
interesting start ....
hope to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena
] • Date [5 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from sparrowhawk
Great characterization, you did a great job grabbing who they are. I like the story and I can't wait to read more.
Review By [sparrowhawk
] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from jammiesMM
This is very good I hope you continue this story I would like to read the rest of it
Review By [jammiesMM
] • Date [26 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of story "Where Man Fears To Tread" from Anonymous Reviewer
Chapter one review
Buffy didn't get her questions one and two answered when she asked them. Guessing she gets them answered later on by herself, which I hope she shares with the rest of the team since demons they can handle...but aliens?
Giles is weird, as in not Gile like.
Uh, understanding Xander and military guy, but not understanding the multiple styles ... and some not developed on Earth thing.
Not getting why Willow would be able to beat two slayers and a full out military Xander in a group attack.
I understand suspension of disbelief and all, but I'm gonna have to say that I don't think the background of them have been explained will enough to give them the skills you have them displaying.
There's a lot of assumptions that the reader has to make. Like Faith's being in the group and being a good guy, while having the last name Wilkins...so change of sides once more for the good guys. Reclaiming a part in the group even after body snatching, beating certain individuals up and such.
It's not a bad story, just a lot left to be explained.
Why didn't Willow go to college? If she did, how could she be such a part of the group...and the Tara thing and the Oz break up never happened? We know she's good with breaking into a computer system, but when did she learn how to create software programs...especially for something like the Stargate program computers?
Maybe I'm putting too much thought into it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment