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Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
I would love to see where this goes, especially if you keep Daniel and Teal'c so close to Buffy... Them as a trio, platonic or otherwise, is an interesting idea. (Maybe she could fall in love with one of them, but remain close to both). Daniel understands Buffy's mystical side and Teal'c is a warrior... I know it has been along time, but this PTSD Buffy really seems like she needs two smart, good men to help her heal and help her embrace her warrior in a way she can't do in the 'real' world. Her doing the girl-bonding thing with Sam and having fun annoying Jack would just be gravy!

Peace,

Blue

This really IS worth exploring some more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [8 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from serenityselena
Review:
what a start ...
and with funny moments too ...
hope you`ll continue the story ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [5 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the Evilest of Authors\Muses.



Since I prefer femslash I'd like a Janet Frasier or Sam Carter match-up.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from Greeneyedgal
Review:
HAHAHA!!!! I LOVE the end of this chapter! It's hilarious!
Review By [Greeneyedgal] • Date [4 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from spring
Review:
I love this fic so far I think it's wonderful! I do however have to wonder about the last few comments by Tea'lc and Danny. Please please please let me know if this is a fic you decided to not complete or if it is something that is finished someplace else. Again I love this fic.
Review By [spring] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from zafaran
Review:
Can we have some more chapters, pretty please? You've got a wonderful setup going here, and I can't wait to find out what you do with the rest of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [14 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from aforestgrew
Review:
I do like the premise of the story and I don't mind so much the odd first chapter which was just a really long author's note; as long as the rest of the story works I don't mind little information dumps. The one thing I have to mention is that I think the last couple lines of the second chapter do not fit in at all. I can see Buffy accidentally slipping and retorting to Jack, "Yeah, Like you!" But the next couple lines by her, Daniel, and Teal'c seem completely out of character to me and really random. I hope you update at some point and that the fic hasn't been abandoned.

Amy
Review By [aforestgrew] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from BlueSilver
Review:
not bad.
Review By [BlueSilver] • Date [3 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from CindyB
Review:
Entertaining! More please.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [29 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from KnightWulf
Review:
it's good a little strange and funny to, but could you tell why she is the way she is please. oh and pretty please update soon.
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [11 Mar 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from spk
Review:
This story just cracks me up!! I'd love to read more. You're great with the humor and the emotional baggage. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [2 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from KarupinLvr
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I've never read a story where Buffy goes to the military first. I really like that. Is Buffy in control of her violent urges? Will she have a love interest? Not immediately of course 'cause the 'Buffy-cookie' isn't completely done yet... Will she bond with Jack and Sam? I really can't wait for your next update.
Review By [KarupinLvr] • Date [26 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
awesoem chapter! looking forward to more
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [3 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from Mali
Review:
This is great! The way Buffy went all... animalistic, was brilliant! I love the way she went all shy and babbly in the end. Lol! The chest hair bit, -laughs uncontrollably-. Keep it up!
Cheers
Review By [Mali] • Date [22 Aug 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Team Member" from banner
Review:
This is a fine start. Buffy is interesting and different.
I'm excited about this story.
Review By [banner] • Date [11 Jul 05] • Not Rated
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