Very nice I like the Idea and the way we get inside Vimes head just like in the books. Dawn in the watch is something I would like to see. She would fit right in with all the other lovable odd balls. Although the there is one thing. The Patrician seems a bit more forward than usual. Otherwise its really good so write more.
Comments from author:
Thank you. The Patrician? I think it's the case of it being the tail end of a long argument... that's already a repeat of many previous ones. That and it can be very hard to get characters like him just right ;)
Thanks. More will be written when the inspiration comes!
Em
Review By [Madam] • Date [19 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]