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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
I love the concept, but it shouldbe at least 3 times as long as it is. You glossed over too much of the development.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from falsegod
Review:
I'd say it was a 9 until the last 2 chapter you should have adopted it out instead of flaking out
Review By [falsegod] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from Stab
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OK, this will iritate me to no end unless I point it out. Mars' two moons are Phobos and Deimos, named after two Legendary Greek figures, the children of Ares (Mars) and Aphrodite (Venus). They were the personifications of Fear and Dread respectively. DEIMOS!!! not DEMONS!
Review By [Stab] • Date [13 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from LordCorwin
Review:
Just finished this ... I'd leave the ending as is .. and start a new "story"......
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [7 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from biggstu
Review:
really enjoyed reading this Thanks for good read
Review By [biggstu] • Date [11 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from banner
Review:
Wow!
That was unexpected, to say the least...
Can't wait for the next story.

Great story.
Review By [banner] • Date [18 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from CPTSkip
Review:
OK, I liked this ending a whole lot better. But... and it is a freaking great "but" ... what a cliffhanger of an ending! I also thought you killed too many people off screen. Heroes should die nobely with lots of butt-kicking involved. *beg* I still really liked your story, but now you have to write the sequel. Please?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10" from banner
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When Anyanka showed up, I had a genuine moment of horror - I'm glad that you ended the story the way you did, although letting two serial killers go was ... irresponsible, to say the least. Did Mr.Trick get killed, too?

I can't wait for the epilogue. And maybe a sequel.
Comments from author:
Yeah, he was dusted when Kakistos was taken out, too. Epilogue will be up soon ... and the loose ends will be 'taken care of'. Thanks for the review (though, sadly, no sequel is planned for now).
Review By [banner] • Date [15 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10" from Mercer
Review:
I have got to say that this Fic is in my top 20 fav's. I love the way that you have toughend up Xander but still show the joker. IMHO the revised chapter 10 in far superior to the original that you posted. Eagerly awaiting the rest of this excellent fic...
Review By [Mercer] • Date [15 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from CPTSkip
Review:
Much better. Two thumbs up from me. I look forward to seeing how you finally end your nifty story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Jul 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10" from RogueCrocodile
Review:
I was very pleased to read this revised version. A far superior ending. I'm now eagerly anticipating the epilogue.

Best regards,
RC
Review By [RogueCrocodile] • Date [14 Jul 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from Caliadragon
Review:
I love this fic and I especially love the way that you have Xander going through therapy. I think it is an excellent idea, though I also agree with Xander that Dana and Helen should have been destroyed.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [14 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10" from Saphrine
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I am really glad you decided to rewrite this ending, I love this story and while I am sorry to see it end I think you can write a much better ending than the first try. Thank you!!
Review By [Saphrine] • Date [14 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "A Doomed Existence" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked your story. The 'reset' ending was a bummer, but I still liked it. Of course we didn't really see Xander pick up the toy gun, did we? Maybe he made a different choice this time also? Lol! I hope you get nibbled on by a new plot bunny ASAP. Thanks for a cool story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Jul 05] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of chapter "9" from AnthonyR2
Review:
Good Story!
Review By [AnthonyR2] • Date [26 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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